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[sid] => 97216
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => red
[time] => 2005-06-07 18:57:51
[hometext] => please please PLEASE comment. i need help............... ~jennie*
[bodytext] => a way of release
a sense of control
with steady hand
the blood i stole
pain in the cut
not in the heart
give me the knife
tear skin apart
fear not the blood
nor the red scar
cant fear what was
just how things are
red on my hands
red on my fists
red on the carpet
red on my wrists
a careful slice
a habit of old
brings memories back
makes me go cold
bloodied and bruised
by my own hand
a way of life
you dont understand
a way of release
a sense of control
an empty cut
suddenly full
come my own blood
come fill me up
emotion of red
flow through the cut
red on my hands
red on my fists
red my heart
red on my wrists
[comments] => 9
[counter] => 174
[topic] => 72
[informant] => blue_angel
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 11
[ratings] => 3
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => self-harmpoetry
)
red
Contributed by
blue_angel
on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 06:57:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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a way of release
a sense of control
with steady hand
the blood i stole
pain in the cut
not in the heart
give me the knife
tear skin apart
fear not the blood
nor the red scar
cant fear what was
just how things are
red on my hands
red on my fists
red on the carpet
red on my wrists
a careful slice
a habit of old
brings memories back
makes me go cold
bloodied and bruised
by my own hand
a way of life
you dont understand
a way of release
a sense of control
an empty cut
suddenly full
come my own blood
come fill me up
emotion of red
flow through the cut
red on my hands
red on my fists
red my heart
red on my wrists
Copyright ©
blue_angel
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2005-06-07 18:57:51]
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Re: red
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by Jimmato on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 07:08:56 PM AEST
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| you don't need comments, its good. Help? yes. :) I've seen what cutting can do and its not pretty (physically and mentally) |
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Re: red
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by Sinned on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 07:33:51 PM AEST
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blue_angel
Don't wast time if you really need help seek it.
Turn yourself over to social services.a hospital.minister,priest or even police.
Let them know you need help.
Your poem was good,but if true it is frightning.
Sinned |
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Re: red
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by sprinter27 on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 07:57:01 PM AEST
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no!!! jennie, don't cut yourself!!! think of what happened to S.A. look at her now. please don't do it. talk to me!!! i'm here. wow.... we both say this and neither uses it. i don't need to talk- you do!! so talk to me!!!!
~sprints
p.s. good poem by the way |
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Re: red
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by sick_n_twisted on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 08:12:12 PM AEST
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| nice poem i likethe flow......get help if you need it good thing to write it all out into poetry i did the same thing i used to cut i know exactaly how you feel and im so sorry so dont waste any time your gonna regret it.... |
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Re: red
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by Zeldianus on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 08:15:16 PM AEST
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Help you need, a friend you need more. Let them take away your pain and your grief, for if they are truly your friend they would do it anyway. Do not abuse yourself, there is nothing warranting that. Things always get better before the end, i promise you. If you need someone to talk to i am here for that but you should also look into getting some REAL help.
Hugs,
-Seth |
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Re: red
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 11:10:55 PM AEST
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Very sad but well said.
Sorry u feel so bad. Please get help 'cause we luv u here.
huggs, luv, prayer,
emy |
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Re: red
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by Jaycee on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 01:17:47 PM AEST
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| Hey, Jennie. What can I say that doesn't sound trite? No, I know I don't understand yiur situation, never having lived your life. I do understand that things have gone downhill as of late and that would bother anyone. You need control, your poem expresses that eloquently, along with release, but is there no other way? You're such a smart kid, you can find a way, right! |
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Re: red
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by Sad-one on
Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 10:47:35 PM AEST
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| i do understand what youre going through. im a cutter myself, and i can truly relate to your pain. Ive only cut 63 times, but i can really understand. i need someone to talk to also and i need help. If you can , e-mail me at taytay13@flash.net |
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Re: red
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by spazz911 on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 03:05:02 PM AEST
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it does have good flow, like u said wen ur right here next to me...lol well i like it, may not like that u write the context but ur pretty damn good at it
kc |
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