Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 16:08:30 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 97174 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Staccato [time] => 2005-06-07 13:20:32 [hometext] => YIKES! Not sure where this came from...random thoughts [bodytext] => Tripping
tripping down the tunnel
images and light funnel
Driving
driving ambition at a stall
around the curb is a pitfall
Patience
patience slipping grip
going down with the ship
Perseverance
perseverance running free
brain and heart cannot agree
Denial
denial a road less travelled
hidden shadows unraveled
Description
description of a minds eye
answers to questions in short supply
Fortress
fortress built on solitude
walls reinforced, steadily accrued
Armor
armor strapped on, pulled tightly
a knight creeping ever so slightly
Window
window replaces a door
brittle spirit starts to restore. [comments] => 11 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 73 [informant] => hauntedscorp [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 25 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )

Staccato

Contributed by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 01:20:32 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

Tripping
tripping down the tunnel
images and light funnel
Driving
driving ambition at a stall
around the curb is a pitfall
Patience
patience slipping grip
going down with the ship
Perseverance
perseverance running free
brain and heart cannot agree
Denial
denial a road less travelled
hidden shadows unraveled
Description
description of a minds eye
answers to questions in short supply
Fortress
fortress built on solitude
walls reinforced, steadily accrued
Armor
armor strapped on, pulled tightly
a knight creeping ever so slightly
Window
window replaces a door
brittle spirit starts to restore.

Copyright © hauntedscorp ... [ 2005-06-07 13:20:32]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Staccato (User Rating: 1 )
by jyssvw22 on Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 01:32:42 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

SCORP you have done it yet again....

fantastic write....

i like the repeated word theme...good flow

Re: Staccato (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 02:14:41 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

great job your reach deep I like that
Michelle

Re: Staccato (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 02:22:09 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

On baby, are you ever getting there! All the things needed for a strong climb back up the rope to yourself. Ah, I am loving this one.

big smiles,
Rita

Re: Staccato (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 04:29:22 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

wow!!
I love the originality!!
Keep em coming, where ever they come from!

Re: Staccato (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 06:10:03 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

i like this it's like a mural a little symphony of

poems, staccato means stiff notes played

muffled, very nice . . .

Ben

aka Dorian Chambers

Re: Staccato (User Rating: 1 )
by Jimmato on Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 06:26:03 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

It came accross as frantic scorp, it was certainly different for you good work

Re: Staccato (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 09:26:36 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

*claps* Great write! I love playing with words and you did it so well in this poem! Sometimes the ones that come out of no where are the best indeed! Wonderful, intriguing write!

Carol

Re: Staccato (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 12:00:56 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

YIKES! :) ....from a very creative mind it would appear. Not only significant areas for focus, but rhyming as well. DISCERNMENT, how random indeed, does Tripping down...to Window restore appear to be?

This was a really fun and very impressive read. Great job, Scorp

Will

Re: Staccato (User Rating: 1 )
by boobiepeach on Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 04:39:04 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

good use of words. i like it its unique. good job.
nat

Re: Staccato (User Rating: 1 )
by Dorkfish on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 03:26:33 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Very nice!

Re: Staccato (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 22nd July 2015 @ 11:50:25 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

The ***** you say ???!!!?!? How did I not comment on this? I am fairly sure I read it as it looks very familiar. Oopsies. Abstract indeed. Random and abstract to say the least. I like the way you just went with it.

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com