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Last Tear
Contributed by
Lone_er
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Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 06:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Hiding loss
Suppressing memories of pain
Hidden tears
Exploding as rain
Years of hurt
Begetting more and more fear
Until the realization
There's a very last tear
One final tear
As it falls to the ground
Ends the hopelessness
New hope abounds
The rain now over
Storm clouds past
A new day beginning
The dawn comes at last
Future comes with promise
Yesterday deals with a memory
Today we lay new foundations
To change destiny
Russ
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Lone_er
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2003-01-04 06:20:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Last Tear
(User Rating: 1 ) by OreO on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 08:51:47 PM AEST (User
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Oh how much of a better inspirational poem could there be than this one, this write is so delicate, and it captivated my inner being....it has a strong message behind it with so much emotion in it.....this is beautiful Russ , i enjoyed this one tremendously my friend...
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Re: Last Tear
(User Rating: 1 ) by azn_poet811 on
Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 09:54:28 AM AEST (User
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I've lost a love, and cried before and never thought that I could stop. Until one I thought to myself, I am just a fool. What is lost, is lost forever and to cry is but a foolish thing. I let her go, and it killed me and crying doesn't help at all. Though to think of it, I still love her. |
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Re: Last Tear
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kirby on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 04:22:37 PM AEST (User
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I enjoyed this poem greatly. After I read this i found my answer to the question that i had asked to me today! Fate lead me to you and I thank you greatly! |
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