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Array ( [sid] => 97155 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Broken Eyes [time] => 2005-06-07 09:50:57 [hometext] => if you think a while the title fits the poem [bodytext] => I fell for you
like you wanted me to
you took a piece of me
so I'll take a piece of you

I want to tear you appart
escape this dark
I cannot find the light
you stole my heart

your a drug
that messed with my brain
I'm lost on the streets
with no money to gain

you killed my heart
I want to tear you appart
you messed with my head
and now I want you dead

I played into your words
I made a mistake
you took all that I had
my life was at stake

Now my revenge will be sweet
it's you I will beat
beat into the ground
you'll no longer be around

you bring out the best in you
and the worst in me
if only people would see you
the way i do now [comments] => 1 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 48 [informant] => ivoryA [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Broken Eyes

Contributed by ivoryA on Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 09:50:57 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I fell for you
like you wanted me to
you took a piece of me
so I'll take a piece of you

I want to tear you appart
escape this dark
I cannot find the light
you stole my heart

your a drug
that messed with my brain
I'm lost on the streets
with no money to gain

you killed my heart
I want to tear you appart
you messed with my head
and now I want you dead

I played into your words
I made a mistake
you took all that I had
my life was at stake

Now my revenge will be sweet
it's you I will beat
beat into the ground
you'll no longer be around

you bring out the best in you
and the worst in me
if only people would see you
the way i do now

Copyright © ivoryA ... [ 2005-06-07 09:50:57]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Broken Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by happynikki on Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 10:08:33 AM AEST
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OMG..i can relate to this like you wouldn't believe..i fell for this guy who's sweet and kind and he told me he loved me..but then he kinda ignored me in school and just turned into this ass but i couldn't get over him because he hugged me when i needed it and he told me he loved me but anywho..enough about me this poem was totally awsome..and doesn't it just suck when peope do that..my favorite part was:
"you killed my heart
I want to tear you appart
you messed with my head
and now I want you dead"

keep up the writing, you got talent, Much Love
~Nikki~

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