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Array ( [sid] => 97149 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Pretty smiles towards the sun [time] => 2005-06-07 08:58:35 [hometext] => something simple...about a close friend. [bodytext] => in all my moments of despair
lights shine through and warm the air
i like the colours of dark sorrow
more like blue and deeper hollow
i saved myself from pills and pain
now i paint what's now the stain
i walk among the colours mixing
dabbing smiles to make frowns fixing
mop and wash the sky of blue
i touch the clouds and capture you

pretty smiles towards the sun
sparkling eyes that love in fun
i stroke her hair with my hand's eye
to seek the beauty that cannot cry
til the sun comes down..
til the sun comes down..

dw

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Pretty smiles towards the sun

Contributed by In_a_While on Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 08:58:35 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

in all my moments of despair
lights shine through and warm the air
i like the colours of dark sorrow
more like blue and deeper hollow
i saved myself from pills and pain
now i paint what's now the stain
i walk among the colours mixing
dabbing smiles to make frowns fixing
mop and wash the sky of blue
i touch the clouds and capture you

pretty smiles towards the sun
sparkling eyes that love in fun
i stroke her hair with my hand's eye
to seek the beauty that cannot cry
til the sun comes down..
til the sun comes down..

dw

Copyright © In_a_While ... [ 2005-06-07 08:58:35]
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Re: Pretty smiles towards the sun (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 12:36:12 PM AEST
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You have captured a fan with this poem. Even through pain and sorry and trials of life, we must still smile and do our best possible.

smiles,
Rita

Re: Pretty smiles towards the sun (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 03:55:51 PM AEST
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simplicity is best!
I love this poem..
your finesse is second to none..
and I love the echo of the last line..

wonderful..just wonderful!

B

Re: Pretty smiles towards the sun (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 10:12:46 AM AEST
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This poem seems a beautiful work of art., with friendship shinning through. When I read this it's as if you are painting a portrait of your friend on canvas

Beautiful work

Will

Re: Pretty smiles towards the sun (User Rating: 1 )
by Jocelyn on Sunday, 29th October 2006 @ 01:00:26 AM AEST
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Something simple but deep meaning in the way the life moving. Thanks to you.

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