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Array ( [sid] => 97146 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Beginning [time] => 2005-06-07 05:51:03 [hometext] => some feelings that I wanted to share, about the man I'm seeing. [bodytext] => I first met him, at a place to dance
And thought that maybe, I’d want a chance
To get to know him, would be nice
But I thought about it, not once but twice

With a handful of attempts, we tried speaking on the phone
But the first few times, all I heard was a dial tone
That was quite hysterical, along with the e-mail
But didn’t want anything, cuz my heart was still frail

And on top of it all, I was so messed up in the head
Because all I thought I wanted, was to get women in bed
Despite of everything, we decided to hang out
And I realized with him, the less I would pout

We continued to spend, more and more time with each other
And then out of nowhere, I had kissed another
Don’t know why, I went and did it
Couldn’t believe I acted, like such a d!ck

But everything was ok, cuz we had cleared the air
But two days later, I saw something I couldn’t bare
He went ahead, and threw it in my face
And after all that, I knew my place

Things seemed to be falling, right in order
And thought about him being, the father of my daughter
But thoughts came creeping, about his ex-wife
Along with knowing, he had a whole other life

So naturally of course, I felt a bit insecure
But when I’m with him, my feelings are so pure
Something happened, while spending so much time
That I just can’t wait, for him to be mine

I’m also becoming, more and more of a wreck
Because soon he’ll be leaving, to go back to Iraq
I don’t want him to go, I want him here
Every time I think about it, I begin to tear

I know I don’t know him, all that well
But part of me feels, like I already fell
His feelings for me, I’m not quite sure
But pain for me, I can no longer endure

He makes me melt, just by how he stares
And I fear nothing, as long as I’m in his care
I’ve got four days left, to spend with him
Then after I leave, my life will be dim

But that is life, so I’ll take it day by day
And hope that maybe, he’ll get to stay
When I’m with him, I’m overwhelmed with emotions
I feel as though I’ve taken, some sort of love potion

As you already know, the “him” is really you
And I know my feelings, for you are true
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The Beginning

Contributed by o7neves on Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 05:51:03 AM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



I first met him, at a place to dance
And thought that maybe, I’d want a chance
To get to know him, would be nice
But I thought about it, not once but twice

With a handful of attempts, we tried speaking on the phone
But the first few times, all I heard was a dial tone
That was quite hysterical, along with the e-mail
But didn’t want anything, cuz my heart was still frail

And on top of it all, I was so messed up in the head
Because all I thought I wanted, was to get women in bed
Despite of everything, we decided to hang out
And I realized with him, the less I would pout

We continued to spend, more and more time with each other
And then out of nowhere, I had kissed another
Don’t know why, I went and did it
Couldn’t believe I acted, like such a d!ck

But everything was ok, cuz we had cleared the air
But two days later, I saw something I couldn’t bare
He went ahead, and threw it in my face
And after all that, I knew my place

Things seemed to be falling, right in order
And thought about him being, the father of my daughter
But thoughts came creeping, about his ex-wife
Along with knowing, he had a whole other life

So naturally of course, I felt a bit insecure
But when I’m with him, my feelings are so pure
Something happened, while spending so much time
That I just can’t wait, for him to be mine

I’m also becoming, more and more of a wreck
Because soon he’ll be leaving, to go back to Iraq
I don’t want him to go, I want him here
Every time I think about it, I begin to tear

I know I don’t know him, all that well
But part of me feels, like I already fell
His feelings for me, I’m not quite sure
But pain for me, I can no longer endure

He makes me melt, just by how he stares
And I fear nothing, as long as I’m in his care
I’ve got four days left, to spend with him
Then after I leave, my life will be dim

But that is life, so I’ll take it day by day
And hope that maybe, he’ll get to stay
When I’m with him, I’m overwhelmed with emotions
I feel as though I’ve taken, some sort of love potion

As you already know, the “him” is really you
And I know my feelings, for you are true




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Re: The Beginning (User Rating: 1 )
by Jimmato on Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 06:26:01 AM AEST
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hope u sort things through and.... careful


Re: The Beginning (User Rating: 1 )
by animusutputo on Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 12:54:50 PM AEST
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Well what can i say....

i'll start with.. very nice.. poem..

And also.. sorry for Both.. "incidences" since i was involved in both... maybe one day we can talk about it... clear the air..

In any case its nice to see some of what you're feeling down in writing... Keep it up


Re: The Beginning (User Rating: 1 )
by CurtisC on Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 04:32:04 PM AEST
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like i've said all along things are gonna work out for you, might not be right away but in due time...you'll get the great life a great person like you deserves eventually :) great write!

Curtis




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