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Array ( [sid] => 97120 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Wake [time] => 2005-06-06 23:19:58 [hometext] => Thoughts that ran through my mind when i had to attend my 3 cousins, open caskets, wake. [bodytext] =>

    Wake up
    Think
    Get ready
    weep
    Leave home
    sheep
    Arrive there
    Hide
    Stay away
    Run
    They are here
    Stunned
    I will go in
    Weep
    Then i will leave
    Think
    Sleep [comments] => 3 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 39 [informant] => Dakota [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
    Wake

    Contributed by Dakota on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 11:19:58 PM in AEST
    Topic: Grief




      Wake up
      Think
      Get ready
      weep
      Leave home
      sheep
      Arrive there
      Hide
      Stay away
      Run
      They are here
      Stunned
      I will go in
      Weep
      Then i will leave
      Think
      Sleep



      Copyright © Dakota ... [ 2005-06-06 23:19:58]
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    Re: Wake (User Rating: 1 )
    by Former_Member on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 11:40:15 PM AEST
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    Bravo, Short but with such intense pain here,I can relate to it, feelings similar to this ran through me when my mom passed.I am terribly sorry for you and your family's loss.To loose loved ones is like loosing the will to breathe.Such a painful write my heart goes out to you.


    Re: Wake (User Rating: 1 )
    by MorningDove on Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 08:57:47 AM AEST
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    That about sums up the lack of feelings. You feel like a programmed robot for a few days. People say eat, you eat. They say sit, you sit. It is just the mind trying to absorb the horrid shock. We get through it but it is a difficult time. My condolensces to you and the family.

    Rita


    Re: Wake (User Rating: 1 )
    by candysears on Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 07:57:07 PM AEST
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    Very nice write...Sad and very tense...God Bless!
    Take care




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