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Array ( [sid] => 97116 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Can You Hear Me?? [time] => 2005-06-06 23:07:13 [hometext] => [bodytext] =>
Hello?
Are you there?
Can you hear me?

My parents
are Getting divorced
Do you care?

If your there
Are you sure
You can hear me?

Because to me
You don’t seem
To care

Do you know
What its like
To be me?

You may
Think you do
But you don’t

Are you sure
You can really
See me?

Blurry eyed
On whiskey
And coke?

No You can not hear me
You cant see
Or know who I am

Because to you
I’m just
A child

As if
I Don’t even have
A name

So tell me Again
You can hear me
Tell me You know who I am

Say you know
What its like
To be me

Because the truth Is something
You’ll never see
Its you Not we In Your Eyes
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Dakota [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Can You Hear Me??

Contributed by Dakota on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 11:07:13 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Hello?
Are you there?
Can you hear me?

My parents
are Getting divorced
Do you care?

If your there
Are you sure
You can hear me?

Because to me
You don’t seem
To care

Do you know
What its like
To be me?

You may
Think you do
But you don’t

Are you sure
You can really
See me?

Blurry eyed
On whiskey
And coke?

No You can not hear me
You cant see
Or know who I am

Because to you
I’m just
A child

As if
I Don’t even have
A name

So tell me Again
You can hear me
Tell me You know who I am

Say you know
What its like
To be me

Because the truth Is something
You’ll never see
Its you Not we In Your Eyes

Copyright Â© Dakota ... [ 2005-06-06 23:07:13]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Can You Hear Me?? (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 11:16:58 PM AEST
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Very sad but awesome writing.
One can see that you've been thru much deep thinking.
I don't know your feelings of parents seperating and divorce.
I can say that I raised my children alone after I divorced their dad.
Hope u find some peace soon.
Jus know that their divorce isn't your fault.
Hang tuff.
huggs, luv, prayer,
emy

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