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Array ( [sid] => 97105 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Fight No More!!!!!! [time] => 2005-06-06 21:24:43 [hometext] => I stop Caring.. This is about me. The feelings I have. I think most everyone can relate to this one. [bodytext] => -------___________-------

The traffic's backed for miles
on these quiet suburban roads
while the rubber necking strangers
are dying to see this victim's wounds

Cause i'm all alone
with my notebooks and poems
in this empty grave where I wrote
all of my secrets that became my life
with no intent to show anyone

Let me drown so I can breathe again
I’m through choking and suffocating
on alter egos and alterior motives
which weigh me down and take control of
the way I am and the things that I need

The life I live and the dreams that I dream
distort and blur all in slow motion
they broke me down and now i'm broken
and it’s sadder than the saddest movie
I ever saw but with out the beauty
so I stopped watching, I stopped caring

I lost all interest and I stopped wearing
these plastic smiles I’ll wash my hands clean
I'll forget that they forgot about me
and I’ll live the life, the big city feeling
cause it’s better than suburban dreaming

Living off the friends that hate me
who talk crap about me
like I don't know who my real friends are
anymore no I don’t know them anymore

and it’s sadder than the saddest movie
I ever saw but without the beauty
so I'll stop watching, I'll stop caring.
Spill the ink and spill my guts again

I've fallen asleep with my eyes open
and they'll lie to all their friends
about sights they never saw
shutting down and off the lights

And they'll preach to all the press
about what they don't know at all
cause after all of this it's all or nothing
still I wouldn't try to fight

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I Fight No More!!!!!!

Contributed by MajesticPoet on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 09:24:43 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



-------___________-------

The traffic's backed for miles
on these quiet suburban roads
while the rubber necking strangers
are dying to see this victim's wounds

Cause i'm all alone
with my notebooks and poems
in this empty grave where I wrote
all of my secrets that became my life
with no intent to show anyone

Let me drown so I can breathe again
I’m through choking and suffocating
on alter egos and alterior motives
which weigh me down and take control of
the way I am and the things that I need

The life I live and the dreams that I dream
distort and blur all in slow motion
they broke me down and now i'm broken
and it’s sadder than the saddest movie
I ever saw but with out the beauty
so I stopped watching, I stopped caring

I lost all interest and I stopped wearing
these plastic smiles I’ll wash my hands clean
I'll forget that they forgot about me
and I’ll live the life, the big city feeling
cause it’s better than suburban dreaming

Living off the friends that hate me
who talk crap about me
like I don't know who my real friends are
anymore no I don’t know them anymore

and it’s sadder than the saddest movie
I ever saw but without the beauty
so I'll stop watching, I'll stop caring.
Spill the ink and spill my guts again

I've fallen asleep with my eyes open
and they'll lie to all their friends
about sights they never saw
shutting down and off the lights

And they'll preach to all the press
about what they don't know at all
cause after all of this it's all or nothing
still I wouldn't try to fight





Copyright © MajesticPoet ... [ 2005-06-06 21:24:43]
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Re: I Fight No More!!!!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by poet70 on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 10:29:40 PM AEST
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Very good write, you laid your emotions out there for the reader ( me ) and was able to draw me into the drama of your life that you seem to be going through. great writing, keep up the good job,
Tammi


Re: I Fight No More!!!!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 11:33:00 PM AEST
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incredible so powerful and full of emotions
Michelle


Re: I Fight No More!!!!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 11:46:35 PM AEST
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such a heart-wrenching but so AMAZINg
your powerful words just reeled me in, i love this very much, you are brilliant
this line makes my heart cry
"and it’s sadder than the saddest movie
I ever saw but without the beauty
so I'll stop watching, I'll stop caring."
just very sad and emotional
and i agree with you when you are talking about your friends, many people only care about themselves but if u look, there a many honest & sincere people out there in this loveless world.
so all in all, magnificent poem! i loved it i did, msg me anytime if u need to talk! ok


Re: I Fight No More!!!!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 06:50:33 PM AEST
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amazing...and i often feel the same way
this poem SCREAMS with emotion - anger, sadness, many many others

great write, i loved it

- Beth -




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