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Array ( [sid] => 97098 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Used [time] => 2005-06-06 21:08:45 [hometext] => This is how he made me feel... [bodytext] => I hate it
feeling like this
used...
like a tissue
a piece of paper
then just thrown away
like a castoff
a shirt
that didn't fit you
so you threw it away

You used me
and I hate this feeling
Like a limp, helpless doll
Devoid of feelings, expressions, opinions

You used me
and it stung me hard
harder than any bee could ever do
for you stung my heart
stung my sould
so hard
that you hade me cry

You used me
and oh it is the worst feeling to be used
I feel weak
weak and pathetic as I cry
Cry not over you
But over the fact that I let myself be used by you

Used
Being used
has to be
the worst feeling in the entire world [comments] => 4 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Serendippitty [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 23 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Used

Contributed by Serendippitty on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 09:08:45 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I hate it
feeling like this
used...
like a tissue
a piece of paper
then just thrown away
like a castoff
a shirt
that didn't fit you
so you threw it away

You used me
and I hate this feeling
Like a limp, helpless doll
Devoid of feelings, expressions, opinions

You used me
and it stung me hard
harder than any bee could ever do
for you stung my heart
stung my sould
so hard
that you hade me cry

You used me
and oh it is the worst feeling to be used
I feel weak
weak and pathetic as I cry
Cry not over you
But over the fact that I let myself be used by you

Used
Being used
has to be
the worst feeling in the entire world

Copyright © Serendippitty ... [ 2005-06-06 21:08:45]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Used (User Rating: 1 )
by MajesticPoet on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 09:11:54 PM AEST
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WOW! I felt every word in this one.. I like it. I am sorry that you where used and felt that way. But for ever one that uses us there are 4 more that will use them.. Karma is two fold. They get theirs worst then they gave.. You will get what you deserve in life. Happiness and caring.. Just let it happen and try not force it and it will come. I promise you that.

MaJ

Re: Used (User Rating: 1 )
by SidneyCid on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 09:38:05 PM AEST
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Yes, Serendippitty, being used is an awful feeling, and I agree with you, and you have my sympathy no end. On the writing end, I am a stickler on using perfect meter, and I like for poems to rhyme. Other than that You have expressed yourself quite well describing your feelings. Watch your step, Don't get bit again. Cheers, SidneyCid

Re: Used (User Rating: 1 )
by Kitty06 on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 09:41:06 PM AEST
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You are an incredible poet, you've managed to get me to read two of your poems in a span of five minutes! Again, a wonderfully heart-wrenching poem. I've been there, two, guys totally suck sometimes. The first stanza when you reference yourself to a piece of paper was great. The four stanza was also amazing, expressing and identifying your anguish. Absolutely wonderful.

Re: Used (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 12:19:30 AM AEST
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i can relate to this in a big way.
Great write.
huggs,
emy
Hold your head up and jus relaize the loss his.

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