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Array ( [sid] => 97083 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => HOLY CRAP [time] => 2005-06-06 19:26:36 [hometext] => this is a true story, today I sliced this kids arm open and now I might get charged with assalt with a deadly weapon [bodytext] => This wasn't suppose to happen
It was all a joke
the knife wasn't that sharp
why did I do it
You are now bleeding
everywhere
bone is showing
You look at me in a strange way
and ask for a rag
your shirt is now coverd in blood
I run as fast as I could
away
anywhere but there
Everytime I blink
I see the gash on your arm
oozing blood everywhere
what did I do
I can now here the sirens comming
and I know its to late [comments] => 4 [counter] => 221 [topic] => 51 [informant] => vampyrekiss [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Event )

HOLY CRAP

Contributed by vampyrekiss on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 07:26:36 PM in AEST
Topic: Event

This wasn't suppose to happen
It was all a joke
the knife wasn't that sharp
why did I do it
You are now bleeding
everywhere
bone is showing
You look at me in a strange way
and ask for a rag
your shirt is now coverd in blood
I run as fast as I could
away
anywhere but there
Everytime I blink
I see the gash on your arm
oozing blood everywhere
what did I do
I can now here the sirens comming
and I know its to late

Copyright © vampyrekiss ... [ 2005-06-06 19:26:36]
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Re: HOLY CRAP (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 07:32:10 PM AEST
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Ummm.... Yikes! How does something like that happen by accident?? I hope the poor kid is okay.
Scorp.

Re: HOLY CRAP (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 07:36:59 PM AEST
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OMG your kidding right?? yes Im wondering also how did that happen on accident were you playing around and someone slipped or what?? Is he gonna be ok?? MMM I hope your not arrested if it was an accident Im sure it will work itself out best of luck

( dont play with knife anymore kk)))

Michelle

Re: HOLY CRAP (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetoccasion29 on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 08:55:14 PM AEST
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i hate this situation you've put yourself in, things will work out im sure considering this was an accident, be a little more careful think things through

Re: HOLY CRAP (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 09:59:31 PM AEST
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Jeez Louise, I hope that kid is alright and his parent's don't file charges. Dang, weren't you ever taught not to play with knives. It is like playing with a loaded gun. NOT a smart idea.

Good luck,
Rita

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