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Array ( [sid] => 97077 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Truely Ever lasting [time] => 2005-06-06 17:50:48 [hometext] => just a poem i wrote for my girl for when she gets home today [bodytext] => Everything about you is truly

Everlasting and moves me just as your beauty

Moves every part of my world

My eyes turn from brown to beryl

For you are in the depths of my soul

You are the light that shines you are the sole

Reason for me being here and for wanting

You the way I do and longing

For your touch and for your arms around me

Everything that you find amazing in me would not be

In me if I did not have you

You are the reason I do what I do

Why I write the way I can

You have made me a far better and stronger man

Everything about you is truly

Everlasting and moves me just as your beauty

Shapes every part of my world

My eyes have changed from brown to beryl

For you are in the depths of me

You are everything I could ever need

You are the light that shines within me

You are what guides me on my way to be

All the things that I want to be for you

For you are all that I need to be true
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Doriens_Picture [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Truely Ever lasting

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 05:50:48 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Everything about you is truly

Everlasting and moves me just as your beauty

Moves every part of my world

My eyes turn from brown to beryl

For you are in the depths of my soul

You are the light that shines you are the sole

Reason for me being here and for wanting

You the way I do and longing

For your touch and for your arms around me

Everything that you find amazing in me would not be

In me if I did not have you

You are the reason I do what I do

Why I write the way I can

You have made me a far better and stronger man

Everything about you is truly

Everlasting and moves me just as your beauty

Shapes every part of my world

My eyes have changed from brown to beryl

For you are in the depths of me

You are everything I could ever need

You are the light that shines within me

You are what guides me on my way to be

All the things that I want to be for you

For you are all that I need to be true




Copyright © Doriens_Picture ... [ 2005-06-06 17:50:48]
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Re: Truely Ever lasting (User Rating: 1 )
by heartless_soul on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 06:57:30 PM AEST
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"true sntaments felt by all who have ever love someone more then themselves."
this is a very loving poem and I know that she will find it no less, to say any thing else would be impolite of me. God bless. (may you two be happy for the rest of time.)

*H_S*


Re: Truely Ever lasting (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 07:23:42 PM AEST
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lovely
Michelle


Re: Truely Ever lasting (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 11:06:38 PM AEST
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Love that is everlasting is seen within these lines, Beautiful write, muaw.


Re: Truely Ever lasting (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 11:16:09 PM AEST
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this ones great too, i love the way you repeat certain lines for emphasize & i love how you emphasised her beauty.
well done, a great piece


Re: Truely Ever lasting (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 03:42:32 PM AEST
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a beautiful and heartfelt write..
she will love it.
I also like the echo of certain lines..

very well written.

B




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