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Array ( [sid] => 97032 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fire Soul [time] => 2005-06-06 11:22:51 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The days we spent were precious
But like all beauty it couldn’t last
The time that’s now at hand
Is fleeting and fading fast

As delicate as the dawn
That illuminates your face
My thoughts turn to memories
From which nothing can replace

My heart which was in pieces
Is thundering loud again
For the first time in ages
I know the true meaning of a friend

Now with everything I’ve lived
And every ounce of pain I’ve known
I can still stand tall tonight
Just knowing I am my own

In this life we all are flowers
Forever beautiful and doomed
And this is the time of my life
When I am perfectly in bloom

Now I lay here on my bed
In this old familiar room
Starring out the window
To trees illuminated by the moon

And it all just seems so perfect
A living picture breathing strong
And all those brilliant leaves
Sing that old familiar song

Now like the sun before me
I retire for the night
Allowing the slightest break
Before the dawn breaks new light

And as I drift off to sleep
I say a pray it all will last
And as I dream of tomorrow
I vow to never resurrect the past [comments] => 3 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 48 [informant] => xsitm [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Fire Soul

Contributed by xsitm on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 11:22:51 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



The days we spent were precious
But like all beauty it couldn’t last
The time that’s now at hand
Is fleeting and fading fast

As delicate as the dawn
That illuminates your face
My thoughts turn to memories
From which nothing can replace

My heart which was in pieces
Is thundering loud again
For the first time in ages
I know the true meaning of a friend

Now with everything I’ve lived
And every ounce of pain I’ve known
I can still stand tall tonight
Just knowing I am my own

In this life we all are flowers
Forever beautiful and doomed
And this is the time of my life
When I am perfectly in bloom

Now I lay here on my bed
In this old familiar room
Starring out the window
To trees illuminated by the moon

And it all just seems so perfect
A living picture breathing strong
And all those brilliant leaves
Sing that old familiar song

Now like the sun before me
I retire for the night
Allowing the slightest break
Before the dawn breaks new light

And as I drift off to sleep
I say a pray it all will last
And as I dream of tomorrow
I vow to never resurrect the past




Copyright © xsitm ... [ 2005-06-06 11:22:51]
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Re: Fire Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 11:28:42 AM AEST
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Wow! This is beautiful. I love everything about this poem. keep up the great work!


Re: Fire Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 11:43:53 AM AEST
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Nice! The second, and the last three stanzas did it for me.
Scorp.


Re: Fire Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 02:13:11 PM AEST
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My hat goes off to your amazing use of imagery and words!!! Very well done and i do hope that you write more. dw

ps. great message too - - Vow to never resurrect the past...




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