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Sweetness, that's too Sour
Contributed by
Thin_skin
on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 05:53:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Listen sweetness, that's too sour.
You knew, you did not have the power..
..to make me cringe, retreat and cower..
poor bewildered, putrid flower.
Copyright ©
Thin_skin
... [
2005-06-06 05:53:16] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Sweetness, that's too Sour
(User Rating: 1 ) by Scarlett on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 07:44:36 AM AEST (User
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short and sweet and made the point! i really liked this. why waste words when a few can do nicely! |
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Re: Sweetness, that's too Sour
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stellar on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 08:05:42 AM AEST (User
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Excellent! It's so powerful! |
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Re: Sweetness, that's too Sour
(User Rating: 1 ) by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 09:31:03 AM AEST (User
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Nice ending! You got some strong emotions across in so few words...that's a hard feat. Nicely done.
Scorp. |
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Re: Sweetness, that's too Sour
(User Rating: 1 ) by In_a_while on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 02:16:20 PM AEST (User
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Powerful!!! short, strong and to a sharp point! i liked it very much and can't wait to read more! dw |
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Re: Sweetness, that's too Sour
(User Rating: 1 ) by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 04:06:04 AM AEST (User
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well done! |
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Re: Sweetness, that's too Sour
(User Rating: 1 ) by ek_da_poet on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 04:06:30 PM AEST (User
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short and sweet , nice clever rhyming you got skillz keep it up pe@ce |
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