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Sweetness, that's too Sour

Contributed by Thin_skin on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 05:53:16 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Listen sweetness, that's too sour.
You knew, you did not have the power..
..to make me cringe, retreat and cower..
poor bewildered, putrid flower.




Copyright © Thin_skin ... [ 2005-06-06 05:53:16]
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Re: Sweetness, that's too Sour (User Rating: 1 )
by Scarlett on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 07:44:36 AM AEST
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short and sweet and made the point! i really liked this. why waste words when a few can do nicely!


Re: Sweetness, that's too Sour (User Rating: 1 )
by Stellar on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 08:05:42 AM AEST
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Excellent! It's so powerful!


Re: Sweetness, that's too Sour (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 09:31:03 AM AEST
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Nice ending! You got some strong emotions across in so few words...that's a hard feat. Nicely done.
Scorp.


Re: Sweetness, that's too Sour (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 02:16:20 PM AEST
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Powerful!!! short, strong and to a sharp point! i liked it very much and can't wait to read more! dw


Re: Sweetness, that's too Sour (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 04:06:04 AM AEST
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well done!


Re: Sweetness, that's too Sour (User Rating: 1 )
by ek_da_poet on Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 04:06:30 PM AEST
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short and sweet , nice clever rhyming you got skillz keep it up pe@ce




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