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Array ( [sid] => 97011 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ~Trying~ plz read [time] => 2005-06-06 01:36:08 [hometext] => its about trying to quit cutting...... [bodytext] => Why are things messed up in my life.
You keep pushing me to cut again with this knife.

I hold these razors in my hand.
Then I let go,becouse thats what other people demand.

Im so close to doing it again.
But I dont want to be put in a phyco bin.

I just want to let this habit go.
But my emotions have become so low.

Pain just creeps up on me.
When I think im so happy.

I wish my pain could heal like my scars mend.
But they cant, and now I just want this misery to end......

Tell me what you think! [comments] => 5 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 13 [informant] => life_goes_on900 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

~Trying~ plz read

Contributed by life_goes_on900 on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 01:36:08 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Why are things messed up in my life.
You keep pushing me to cut again with this knife.

I hold these razors in my hand.
Then I let go,becouse thats what other people demand.

Im so close to doing it again.
But I dont want to be put in a phyco bin.

I just want to let this habit go.
But my emotions have become so low.

Pain just creeps up on me.
When I think im so happy.

I wish my pain could heal like my scars mend.
But they cant, and now I just want this misery to end......

Tell me what you think!

Copyright © life_goes_on900 ... [ 2005-06-06 01:36:08]
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Re: ~Trying~ plz read (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 01:44:00 AM AEST
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i ve been a cutter for a long time and its been a while since the last time ive cut

to tell you the trueth things do get better and it will coem a time where you dont feel a reason to cutt

Re: ~Trying~ plz read (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 01:44:13 AM AEST
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I don't know what u feel but medication from a Dr. could help u. If I didn't take meds I'm sure I would be in a lunny bin. I don't mean that as anything derogatory to anyone. That's jus my figure of speach.
huggs,
prayer,
emy

Re: ~Trying~ plz read (User Rating: 1 )
by Scarlett on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 07:48:24 AM AEST
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i agree with emy, if i hadn't gone to the doctors i would be insane by now. old habits die hard but keep trying.

Re: ~Trying~ plz read (User Rating: 1 )
by Thin_skin on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 09:24:46 AM AEST
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im on anti depressants at the mo..i hav words cut into my skin, pills help..but its better to try your hardest without them x

Re: ~Trying~ plz read (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 10:30:53 AM AEST
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I am not a fan of cutter poems, but this grabbed my attention, this piece was written with such intense feelings, I can feel that.Everyone is giving you suggestions of meds. well been there done that, my advice to you is try meditating every time you find your sef reaching for the knive , razor blades etc.Sometimes the best cure can be hidden within yourself. Good write , god bless and good luck

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