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CALL IT LOVE
GIVE ME PERMISSION JUST TO BE ALIVE
CALL IT LOVE
C’MON BABY TELL ME WHAT I CAN AND CANNOT DO
CALL IT LOVE
I LOVED YOU ONCE BUT NOW I’M SEEING THROUGH
I CALLED IT LOVE
EACH DAY YOUR CONTROLLING GAMES OF INSECURITY
YOU CALLED IT LOVE
I ALWAYS SMILE FOR YOU BUT IT’S REALLY MISERY
IS THIS LOVE
HOLD ME DOWN WITH EXPECTATIONS I CANNOT MEET
WHAT IS LOVE
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She Loves Me, She Loves Me Not

Contributed by Undeadsuperstar on Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 05:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

YOU PUT YOUR SHACKLES ON MY HEART AND MIND
CALL IT LOVE
GIVE ME PERMISSION JUST TO BE ALIVE
CALL IT LOVE
C’MON BABY TELL ME WHAT I CAN AND CANNOT DO
CALL IT LOVE
I LOVED YOU ONCE BUT NOW I’M SEEING THROUGH
I CALLED IT LOVE
EACH DAY YOUR CONTROLLING GAMES OF INSECURITY
YOU CALLED IT LOVE
I ALWAYS SMILE FOR YOU BUT IT’S REALLY MISERY
IS THIS LOVE
HOLD ME DOWN WITH EXPECTATIONS I CANNOT MEET
WHAT IS LOVE

Copyright Â© Undeadsuperstar ... [ 2003-01-03 17:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: She Loves Me, She Loves Me Not (User Rating: 1 )
by kimbo on Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 06:54:19 PM AEST
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wow a great piece, i was always taught that love is about freedom but for some it is all about suffocation and control well written and really enjoyed, makes you glad to know that others have experienced all that can be destroying in the name of love.

Re: She Loves Me, She Loves Me Not (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 07:03:05 PM AEST
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i've felt that not very fun great poem I could relate to it alot way to go on another great write.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: She Loves Me, She Loves Me Not (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 10:41:08 PM AEST
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Im speechless.......
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: She Loves Me, She Loves Me Not (User Rating: 1 )
by rustygrl33 on Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 10:51:05 AM AEST
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nice write

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