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Array ( [sid] => 96996 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => without your hand on my heart [time] => 2005-06-06 00:37:33 [hometext] => waking up wothouut your love by your side [bodytext] => I woke up this morning
I didn't brush my hair
I made breakfast for two
even though you weren't there

today was the first day
I had to live without you
I'm going crazy
I don't know what to do

I hugged my pillow
searched for your sent
cheked the mail
for a letter sent

in my pajamas
I walked to the park
I didn't know what to do
without your hand on my heart

how could you leave me here
with these memories that pain
how could you watch me cry
and not see it through the rain

so I ask you my love
where did you go
you left me a letter
with no X's or O's

I woke up this morning
I didn't brush my hair
I made breakfast for two
even thoug you weren't there [comments] => 4 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 22 [informant] => all_the_dead_roses [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

without your hand on my heart

Contributed by all_the_dead_roses on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 12:37:33 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I woke up this morning
I didn't brush my hair
I made breakfast for two
even though you weren't there

today was the first day
I had to live without you
I'm going crazy
I don't know what to do

I hugged my pillow
searched for your sent
cheked the mail
for a letter sent

in my pajamas
I walked to the park
I didn't know what to do
without your hand on my heart

how could you leave me here
with these memories that pain
how could you watch me cry
and not see it through the rain

so I ask you my love
where did you go
you left me a letter
with no X's or O's

I woke up this morning
I didn't brush my hair
I made breakfast for two
even thoug you weren't there

Copyright © all_the_dead_roses ... [ 2005-06-06 00:37:33]
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Re: without your hand on my heart (User Rating: 1 )
by gwenevere on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 02:18:26 AM AEST
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Sorry I'm the first to comment on your pain.Such a sad poem.I hope you sort things out .good Luck

Re: without your hand on my heart (User Rating: 1 )
by xdeadxdollyx on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 10:28:27 AM AEST
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Thats sad but I really like the poem though. Hopefully they will come back..

Re: without your hand on my heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 03:31:04 PM AEST
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'tis beautiful saddness my friend..
much happiness to you in the future..

B

Re: without your hand on my heart (User Rating: 1 )
by jessalynn on Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 09:29:56 PM AEST
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I'm sorry
your pain to me is so real I have been there time and time again waiting and waiting to die of a broken heart just remember it always get worst before it gets better

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