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despair and grief
these are the words
that describe my speech

I heard you, I listened
I thought you heard too
but the truth is you didn't
and right now I hate you

can't express anger
but wont tell a lie
your decisions are fuetal
and in the end they will die

you said one thing
but another was meant
starting to feel that
your not heaven sent

you lied and you stabbed
went back on your word
and now you are hanging
on some other girl

it makes me so mad
and you weren't even mine
so whos to believe
when loves on your mind

who will be next
in your list of friends
I thought she was worth it
but I'm not right, again [comments] => 7 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 48 [informant] => spazz911 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Not Heaven Sent

Contributed by spazz911 on Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 09:12:08 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

pain and heatfelt
despair and grief
these are the words
that describe my speech

I heard you, I listened
I thought you heard too
but the truth is you didn't
and right now I hate you

can't express anger
but wont tell a lie
your decisions are fuetal
and in the end they will die

you said one thing
but another was meant
starting to feel that
your not heaven sent

you lied and you stabbed
went back on your word
and now you are hanging
on some other girl

it makes me so mad
and you weren't even mine
so whos to believe
when loves on your mind

who will be next
in your list of friends
I thought she was worth it
but I'm not right, again

Copyright © spazz911 ... [ 2005-06-05 21:12:08]
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Re: Not Heaven Sent (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 09:20:19 PM AEST
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aww... i loved it!!! but tell me, who's this about??? i thought i knew... and then another line came up and i'm confused!!! i'm confused, but please, my shoulder is open. i have 2, you know. one for you and one for jennie. use them please!!! keep up the good work!!

~sprints

Re: Not Heaven Sent (User Rating: 1 )
by juliette on Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 09:21:07 PM AEST
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My first read of the night - and I liked it! Good job! Thanks for sharing,
juliette

Re: Not Heaven Sent (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 09:21:32 PM AEST
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Very emotionally driven write. Good flow. One small thing: Futile not fuetal. Other than that, good job.
Scorp.

Re: Not Heaven Sent (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 09:21:58 PM AEST
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Very good write.
a masterpeice.
huggs,
emy
This write shows great creative thinking.

Re: Not Heaven Sent (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 09:36:26 PM AEST
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you lied and you stabbed
went back on your word
and now you are hanging
on some other girl

it makes me so mad
and you weren't even mine
so whos to believe
when loves on your mind

these lines make me wanna think this is about derrick... am i right? pm me n tell me cuz ill ferget to ask tomoro lol. a great write... would be more clear if i knew who u were talking about lol. u are a brilliant poet kc!
luv n hugs,
jennie* xXx

Re: Not Heaven Sent (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 09:51:10 PM AEST
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friends are a dime a dozen

Re: Not Heaven Sent (User Rating: 1 )
by jessalynn on Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 01:40:57 PM AEST
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the write lets me in to feel your pain and frustration..and i have been there time and time again...i like revenge

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