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Array ( [sid] => 9696 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Mommy,Daddy..Dont Fight [time] => 2003-01-03 15:40:00 [hometext] => This was written when my parents were in a fight ( rite now ).Except it is written in the view of a five year old. It does relate to my own experiences in many ways.. but no quite the same. Please enjoy it and leave your comments! :)
Thx,

Chanti* [bodytext] => Mommys crying,
He is yelling,
save me from this place.

where can I go,
where are they all happy,
God, I need some space.

Cant stand the swearing,
hate the fighting,
tell me, whats going on.

My cheeks soaked in the morning,
and tears come in the dawn.

Im only five years old,
and I just dont understand,

Why is Daddy leaving,
send an angel to hold my hand.

I wonder if hes coming back,
I wonder, is Mommy okay,

And does it even matter,
did she ever love me anyway?

Mommy, please dont cry like that,
please dont say youll leave...

And now im all alone,
wiping tears off on my sleeve. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Chanti [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Mommy,Daddy..Dont Fight

Contributed by Chanti on Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 03:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Mommys crying,
He is yelling,
save me from this place.

where can I go,
where are they all happy,
God, I need some space.

Cant stand the swearing,
hate the fighting,
tell me, whats going on.

My cheeks soaked in the morning,
and tears come in the dawn.

Im only five years old,
and I just dont understand,

Why is Daddy leaving,
send an angel to hold my hand.

I wonder if hes coming back,
I wonder, is Mommy okay,

And does it even matter,
did she ever love me anyway?

Mommy, please dont cry like that,
please dont say youll leave...

And now im all alone,
wiping tears off on my sleeve.

Copyright © Chanti ... [ 2003-01-03 15:40:00]
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Re: Mommy,Daddy..Dont Fight (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 04:21:32 PM AEST
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Sad, but so nicely written.
Jenni

Re: Mommy,Daddy..Dont Fight (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 07:01:08 PM AEST
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this was so sad,I know theres been many times I have seen this sort of thing & its always the children who get hurt! Good write! Christina

Re: Mommy,Daddy..Dont Fight (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 07:06:21 PM AEST
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Damn... this was sooooo good almost made me cry. Wow... I loved the line 'tears come in the dawn' very powerful all of it... I'm stunned.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Mommy,Daddy..Dont Fight (User Rating: 1 )
by thorns on Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 01:28:53 AM AEST
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my parents have fought from time to time since i was a kid. your poem shows effectively the pain and confusion cildren feel when parents fight.

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