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Array ( [sid] => 96948 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Messemotioments Part 1 [time] => 2005-06-05 19:01:30 [hometext] => Will he catch me before it's too late? [bodytext] => I dragged my feet a little,
He gave my hand a firm tug.
My head drooped a little,
He nudged my chin to his shoulder.
But again i slouched
And a stinging hot tear split my cheek
His strong hand let it rest
Amongst the creases of his gentle palm.

His eyes pierced me
My insides roared
His warm smooth skin
Gave me shivers
That rippled so deep
They cracked my soul
I soaked him up
His expressions, every scar
I knew them all

But I do not know these
Or why. Why
So distant, so cold?
He shakes my arm
He does not notice now
How I stare at the floor
As I smudge and I blur
As I trip and I fall [comments] => 2 [counter] => 488 [topic] => 48 [informant] => gherkin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Messemotioments Part 1

Contributed by gherkin on Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 07:01:30 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I dragged my feet a little,
He gave my hand a firm tug.
My head drooped a little,
He nudged my chin to his shoulder.
But again i slouched
And a stinging hot tear split my cheek
His strong hand let it rest
Amongst the creases of his gentle palm.

His eyes pierced me
My insides roared
His warm smooth skin
Gave me shivers
That rippled so deep
They cracked my soul
I soaked him up
His expressions, every scar
I knew them all

But I do not know these
Or why. Why
So distant, so cold?
He shakes my arm
He does not notice now
How I stare at the floor
As I smudge and I blur
As I trip and I fall

Copyright © gherkin ... [ 2005-06-05 19:01:30]
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Re: Messemotioments Part 1 (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 07:14:53 PM AEST
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Nicely written keep up the good work!

Re: Messemotioments Part 1 (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 08:39:39 PM AEST
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aww... i loved this poem. it's awesome and well written. keep up the good work!!! and best of luck wished to you!!

~sprints

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