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Array ( [sid] => 96903 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Have Nothing Left [time] => 2005-06-05 12:02:27 [hometext] => Life has been crazy here in Iraq the last few days. Something I wrote today and realized to be true. If its true then why live and what’s the point of life....Always me and know one else….Steve [bodytext] =>
I have no words
I have no voice
I have no hope
I have no choice
With hate I burn
And a pain like greed
My pain is life
And there’s life in me

My thoughts are blood
As my thoughts flow
Blood that’s think
With pain it shows
Run down my face
And down my feet
And release this pain
that’s lost in grief

Tears in my eyes
Tears of disgust
With hate in my eyes
that’s full of lust
Demons in side
That tear me apart
That tear at my mind
And rip out my heart

With Anguish I Fall
For I’ve lost my life
I’ve given it up
For I’ve lost my pride
Death is sweat
And with a smile I see
My life and my love
As I’m taken to piece

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I Have Nothing Left

Contributed by sride686 on Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 12:02:27 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

I have no words
I have no voice
I have no hope
I have no choice
With hate I burn
And a pain like greed
My pain is life
And there’s life in me

My thoughts are blood
As my thoughts flow
Blood that’s think
With pain it shows
Run down my face
And down my feet
And release this pain
that’s lost in grief

Tears in my eyes
Tears of disgust
With hate in my eyes
that’s full of lust
Demons in side
That tear me apart
That tear at my mind
And rip out my heart

With Anguish I Fall
For I’ve lost my life
I’ve given it up
For I’ve lost my pride
Death is sweat
And with a smile I see
My life and my love
As I’m taken to piece

Copyright Â© sride686 ... [ 2005-06-05 12:02:27]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I Have Nothing Left (User Rating: 1 )
by Unbreakable on Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 12:30:02 PM AEST
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Wow..this is a great write, filled with feeling. I love the way it begins and the end is perfect. Good job!

Krystal

Re: I Have Nothing Left (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 12:44:49 PM AEST
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Sorry about the errors in the write I just wrote it fast and submitted it then read it and noticed. The last word is peace as I’m sure you all know. But what ever ***** it you eather like it or you don’t….Steve

Re: I Have Nothing Left (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 12:45:20 PM AEST
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This is a very, VERY honest write. I applaud you for that Steve. The self loathing and anguish is so incredibly real in this piece...My heart goes out to you....Stay strong.
Scorp.

Re: I Have Nothing Left (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 02:18:34 PM AEST
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Steve, you are in a land of pain. Fight hard to not let it overtake you. There has been hate, killing and war there since the beginning of time. It is not unusual you would feel it if you have any empathy in you at all. Please fight against it and stay safe and come home. Go deep into yourself and find the peace that is there and pull it out and shield yourself with it. The angels are beside you but cannot help if you give up your soul to this horror. Please continue to write out your anguish and I am here if you need to really vent it out. I do understand more than you know. Rita

Re: I Have Nothing Left (User Rating: 1 )
by bethers_is_my_baby on Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 10:09:33 PM AEST
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hey there steve, all i have to say is.. another great poem from a great poet (and -from what i take from ur poems and were u are/what ur doin- a great person as well) keep up tha great work there!! :) if i had prayers, ud be in them lolz, but i will be thinkin of u and hopin for tha best!!! take care!!! lots of love!!

*~Amanda Hope~*

Re: I Have Nothing Left (User Rating: 1 )
by desireemiote on Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 12:43:55 PM AEST
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You may have returned by now but maybe you haven't I hope you are doing better than you were when you wrote this. I will be hoping for your safe return. I will also be hoping that you feel at peace without death. My hopes are with you.
Megan(and her bun in the oven)

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