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Array ( [sid] => 96881 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => One Day [time] => 2005-06-05 02:00:17 [hometext] => This is a poem I wrote while trying to get over a break up and feeling out of place and lost... [bodytext] => She looks up at the sky,
Dreaming about the stars,
Wishing she could live up there,
Where nothing could hurt her,
But she knows that she’s stuck.

If you could spend one day in her shoes,
If you could ask her why she’s crying,
If you could help her up when she falls,
Could you save her?

If you could even pretend to care about her,
If you could listen to her problems,
If you could just hug her when she needs it.
Could you save her?

She’s hurting inside,
It effects everything she does,
If you could just care about her,
Even just for one day,

She needs to know that some one is there for her,
Even if no one is there,
If you could just pretend to love her,
Would she be alright?

This girl needs your help,
She needs you more than anything,
Because this girl is me... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Karlee14 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

One Day

Contributed by Karlee14 on Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 02:00:17 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

She looks up at the sky,
Dreaming about the stars,
Wishing she could live up there,
Where nothing could hurt her,
But she knows that she’s stuck.

If you could spend one day in her shoes,
If you could ask her why she’s crying,
If you could help her up when she falls,
Could you save her?

If you could even pretend to care about her,
If you could listen to her problems,
If you could just hug her when she needs it.
Could you save her?

She’s hurting inside,
It effects everything she does,
If you could just care about her,
Even just for one day,

She needs to know that some one is there for her,
Even if no one is there,
If you could just pretend to love her,
Would she be alright?

This girl needs your help,
She needs you more than anything,
Because this girl is me...

Copyright Â© Karlee14 ... [ 2005-06-05 02:00:17]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: One Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 03:17:07 AM AEST
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Very nice...I hope that what ever your going through..you come out ok

Re: One Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 03:21:14 AM AEST
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liked this too.out of so many cruel hearts out there,theres good one's still,and to help,mines is one of those too.I care so much bout others,that i 4get me sometimes,lol,im here if u wanna talk,u can find a friend in me.t/c.
love,
andrea

Re: One Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 03:09:25 PM AEST
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Eh, not a bad poem. Everybody needs to be saved.

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