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I-found- you-like-my-heart

Torn and broken with your wings clipped

So-I- reached-inside-me

With hope in one hand I found a key

I opened the cage but you did not fly away

You did not come to me

So I went to you

Took-you-into-my-arms

Your heart was beating

I felt it take over mine

You closed your eyes and fell asleep

So I carried you home

You were too broken to be set free

And so I took it upon my self to help you mend

You where too beautiful not to fall for
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Aviary for an Angel

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 10:33:59 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I found you in a cage

I-found- you-like-my-heart

Torn and broken with your wings clipped

So-I- reached-inside-me

With hope in one hand I found a key

I opened the cage but you did not fly away

You did not come to me

So I went to you

Took-you-into-my-arms

Your heart was beating

I felt it take over mine

You closed your eyes and fell asleep

So I carried you home

You were too broken to be set free

And so I took it upon my self to help you mend

You where too beautiful not to fall for

Copyright © Doriens_Picture ... [ 2005-06-04 22:33:59]
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Re: Aviary for an Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by poet70 on Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 10:46:54 PM AEST
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I tell the truth when I say I like it, but I am a little confused, you put it in the love and romance section? but I see you talking about a bird, hmmm different. Still a good poem.
Tammi

Re: Aviary for an Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 11:16:00 PM AEST
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awweee, i love it, muaw

Re: Aviary for an Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 12:13:41 PM AEST
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nice write.. heartfelt
I like the bird analogy..
But in the last line.. thinkin' you meant
to say "were" instead of "where"..
good job though-

B

Re: Aviary for an Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 12:54:43 PM AEST
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a very beautiful write :)

pix xx

Re: Aviary for an Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 02:02:06 PM AEST
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so incredibly beautiful and moving.......

Re: Aviary for an Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 11:11:25 PM AEST
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uh-uh i get the metaphor, it is very deep but a great write of substance and love. im sure she appreciates you helping her to fly again, u are a wonderful person.
i love the last line, o well done

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