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Array ( [sid] => 96852 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cant take it no more [time] => 2005-06-04 21:03:26 [hometext] => This is how I feel and I cant take my life no more..if its not good or well thanks for reading [bodytext] => Wheres my heart in you?
Wheres my friend in you that was true?

I cant take it no more,
I told you once before,
Dont mess with me,
Or seeing me dead is what will have to be.
My heart is not strong,
But what your doing is wrong.

I am in love like no one can ever be,
But your trying to act like me,
Saying you never see your love,
But the Angels see you with your love every day up above.
I even know cause your here every day with my brother.

I cant take it no more,
I told you once before,
Dont mess like that with me,
Or seeing me dead is what will have to be.
My heart isnt strong,
But what your doing is so wrong.

Your suppose to be my friend,
And I was hoping it wasnt going to end,
It might have to,
And dont worry I'm not lieing to you.
I love you, I really do
But not what your putting me through.

I cant take this no more,
And yes I did told you once before,
Dont mess with me,
Or seeing me dead is what will have to be,
My heart isnt strong,
Especially from pain,
But what your doing is wrong,
And your making my tears pour like rain.

My friend,
If your reading this,
I hope you know much you made me feel like this,
And how much I am thinking about our friendship to end.
You hurt to many times,
Taking my man to play with you,
And cheating on my brother was so unkind,
My brother believes you more than me,
And making me feel this way,
Thats so not right.
I cant believe you.
I hope you know how I feel. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Baby_Grl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Cant take it no more

Contributed by Baby_Grl on Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 09:03:26 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Wheres my heart in you?
Wheres my friend in you that was true?

I cant take it no more,
I told you once before,
Dont mess with me,
Or seeing me dead is what will have to be.
My heart is not strong,
But what your doing is wrong.

I am in love like no one can ever be,
But your trying to act like me,
Saying you never see your love,
But the Angels see you with your love every day up above.
I even know cause your here every day with my brother.

I cant take it no more,
I told you once before,
Dont mess like that with me,
Or seeing me dead is what will have to be.
My heart isnt strong,
But what your doing is so wrong.

Your suppose to be my friend,
And I was hoping it wasnt going to end,
It might have to,
And dont worry I'm not lieing to you.
I love you, I really do
But not what your putting me through.

I cant take this no more,
And yes I did told you once before,
Dont mess with me,
Or seeing me dead is what will have to be,
My heart isnt strong,
Especially from pain,
But what your doing is wrong,
And your making my tears pour like rain.

My friend,
If your reading this,
I hope you know much you made me feel like this,
And how much I am thinking about our friendship to end.
You hurt to many times,
Taking my man to play with you,
And cheating on my brother was so unkind,
My brother believes you more than me,
And making me feel this way,
Thats so not right.
I cant believe you.
I hope you know how I feel.

Copyright © Baby_Grl ... [ 2005-06-04 21:03:26]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Cant take it no more (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 09:17:56 PM AEST
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i like the poem! well, not the thing behind it... that's just cruel. and i'm sorry you have to put up with a friend like this. find other friend, better ones... and get your brother to believe you. i believe you can. wishing you the best of luck!!

~sprints

p.s. keep up the good work!!

Re: Cant take it no more (User Rating: 1 )
by Giggles1989 on Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 07:28:46 AM AEST
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hey sis,
I know that u love me and i love u, but please dont say stupid things i dont want to lose another best friend. I have lose like 5 already and 1 more would just kill me. :(( I know who ur talking about and that poem is just fine in telling her how u feel because she is dumb for complaining so much about not being able to see ur brother. u barley get to see ur man. she should be happy she gets to see him at all. I know how ur feeling because u have told me so many times before. Amanda dont care about any of her friends she only care about herself and ur brother which is some BULL!!!!!!! she should put her friends before love because friends cant be replace. love can be replaced. Trust me I know that. I already want to hit her for saying she cared at the carnival and then going away and making out with brother. I know that ur the only person who can understand and care about me besides Jeremy. I am about the only person who can understand where all this is coming from and y u feel this way. I dont care if she reads this I hope she does so she knows how we both feel. I know that this is long, but I have to stick up for my sis and also tell u how I feel and I hope that u let Amanda read this so she knows how PO'ed she is making us to be. Honestly I only wanna hang-out with u because she is so annoying about seeing him. she comes here then leaves like 5 minutes later she said that she HAS to see billy and she sees him all the damn time. Anyways great poem sis I love u and keep writing.
Stephanie

Re: Cant take it no more (User Rating: 1 )
by hellsfallenangel on Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 04:12:50 PM AEST
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it good and dont worry im going to try and fix all this sh** for u ok ttyl lil sis

DEMON

Re: Cant take it no more (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 09:25:09 PM AEST
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just wanted to know, is this about me?

army brat

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