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hold the grief of this
unbearable sorrow

Tear stained faces
looking to mama for
answers to this riddle
mama will ease the pain

Answer your questions,
I try my angels hold
back the truth i'll
sugar coat, all the
while tracing the silver
lining along your cloud

Hold you near
pressed to my heart
hold back my tears
smile as I slowly fall apart
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ANGELS IN HELL

Contributed by sweetoccasion29 on Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 08:32:55 PM in AEST
Topic: schoolproblems

The children of my heart
hold the grief of this
unbearable sorrow

Tear stained faces
looking to mama for
answers to this riddle
mama will ease the pain

Answer your questions,
I try my angels hold
back the truth i'll
sugar coat, all the
while tracing the silver
lining along your cloud

Hold you near
pressed to my heart
hold back my tears
smile as I slowly fall apart

Copyright © sweetoccasion29 ... [ 2005-06-04 20:32:55]
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Re: ANGELS IN HELL (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 08:41:38 PM AEST
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aww.... i like this poem. and the "mama" part reminds me of the song "Hero of the Day" i like this poem and the song. keep up the good work.

~sprints

Re: ANGELS IN HELL (User Rating: 1 )
by Serendippitty on Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 09:58:15 PM AEST
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I really liked this, holding back tears, not being able to cry when something is wrong, I know the feeling... i look forward to reading more, liked the title too

Re: ANGELS IN HELL (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 09:09:31 AM AEST
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this is beautiful tanya, i know your feeling , I think we took the art of trying to fix everything for our kids from mom.love always lovely29 A.K.A NATAS

Re: ANGELS IN HELL (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 01:29:10 PM AEST
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A sad and touching poem i hear your words

and feel your sadness in my heart always

here 4 u your pro . . . (((((((4tanya))))) Ben

Re: ANGELS IN HELL (User Rating: 1 )
by Kamal on Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 01:32:07 PM AEST
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Whoa thats pretty
made me recollect about life for a minute or two

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