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[sid] => 96765
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Slow Death
[time] => 2005-06-03 21:32:51
[hometext] => he was her best friend and he left her alone. so when she killed herself, he ran back... to realize it was too late.... plz comment
[bodytext] => As she lets go Life begins to slow As she slowly dies Past years go by There are only 15 years She bursts into tears What was the point of being here? If she was just to bear It for only 15 years? Then she begins to fear That she did the wrong thing But then remembers the arguing and fighting Then knows it was right To give up her end of the fight Then her one friend runs next to her Yes, the one that didn’t care About her for awhile now But that friend screams ‘how?’ She looks up at her friend through bloody eyes And sees her friend cry She smiles at her friend and grabs his hand ‘Don’t worry my dear friend, You left me first, now I get to leave But please don’t miss me And don’t feel bad Although it was you who made me sad But, really, just move on I know you can’ His tears are now falling onto her body ‘But why… why didn’t you call anybody?’ ‘I did. You just didn’t hear me Then I got sick of screaming And getting no reply It might hurt now, but really I have to die You’ll see this sometime You’ll see it from my side Then you’ll understand And then you won’t be so sad Please friend, Realize that it’s my time to end It may hurt now, I know But all I could do was let go’ He watches his friend fall weak And he begins to scream He cradles her body next to his Wishing he could’ve helped prevent this He begins to curse himself As tears pour down his face [comments] => 2 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 36 [informant] => sprinter27 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
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