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Down a never-ending hole
A path
I should have chosen not to take
I fell for them
All the lies
Hidden In a disguise
I could have caught
If I had only tried
I should have known it wasn’t real
From the moment I thought I could feel
Now I’m cursed
A curse I can never reimburse
I’m kept alive by a single lie
A string threatened by sharp scissors
The glittering blades laugh in my face
Snickering at my stupidity and gullibility
It’s as if I was blind
With my life at stake
I had a chance I chose not to take
Lost my balance in my fear
Fell off the edge
And now I’m here
Falling
On my way down
I’m looking back at my life
Wishing I had no regrets
But finding that’s all I have
I could have told you all I felt
If only I had won the battle against myself
With no hope for the future
I lie here waiting to die.
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Falling

Contributed by ivoryA on Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 07:59:46 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I’m on my way down
Down a never-ending hole
A path
I should have chosen not to take
I fell for them
All the lies
Hidden In a disguise
I could have caught
If I had only tried
I should have known it wasn’t real
From the moment I thought I could feel
Now I’m cursed
A curse I can never reimburse
I’m kept alive by a single lie
A string threatened by sharp scissors
The glittering blades laugh in my face
Snickering at my stupidity and gullibility
It’s as if I was blind
With my life at stake
I had a chance I chose not to take
Lost my balance in my fear
Fell off the edge
And now I’m here
Falling
On my way down
I’m looking back at my life
Wishing I had no regrets
But finding that’s all I have
I could have told you all I felt
If only I had won the battle against myself
With no hope for the future
I lie here waiting to die.

Copyright Â© ivoryA ... [ 2005-06-03 19:59:46]
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Re: Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by Always on Monday, 7th January 2008 @ 08:10:29 PM AEST
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The future always changes, just not sure if it gets better. But I loved that read.

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