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Array ( [sid] => 96749 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mom,... [time] => 2005-06-03 19:50:23 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Im trying so hard not to feel bad,
Trying so much not to be sad,
But all those times you kill me inside,
Over and over again
When i feel the best i can

Im trying to hard to be happy
And i cant hold on to anything good
When i feel so torn,
Completly broken by you

Why dont you tell me how much i dissapoint you
Stop trying to hide your shame for me
And telling me if only i knew.

I know how disgusted you are by how i feel
You tell me how wrong it is, and act like you know
You dont know how it feels to be this way
The lonelyness, pain, self-hate and ashamed
Hiding who you are, tortured by others

Theres no relationship between us
There never will be
And i cant talk to you, when ive tried to so hard
If i told you how i felt it would bring you more disgust

Why do you take away what you know makes me happy
You see how unhappy i am
But you take away my only joy, only love
The one person that keeps me alive
Why do you take her from me, because i love her

This is how it will always be
Theres nothing i can do,
To have you accept me
So i must say goodbye to you,
For im leaving you emotionally, till i can leave physicaly too

So thanks for everytime you made me cry,
Thanks for making me hurt so much
Thanks for everything you did that killed me inside
Thanks for never being there, When i needed you the most.

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Mom,...

Contributed by willow_tara72002 on Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 07:50:23 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Im trying so hard not to feel bad,
Trying so much not to be sad,
But all those times you kill me inside,
Over and over again
When i feel the best i can

Im trying to hard to be happy
And i cant hold on to anything good
When i feel so torn,
Completly broken by you

Why dont you tell me how much i dissapoint you
Stop trying to hide your shame for me
And telling me if only i knew.

I know how disgusted you are by how i feel
You tell me how wrong it is, and act like you know
You dont know how it feels to be this way
The lonelyness, pain, self-hate and ashamed
Hiding who you are, tortured by others

Theres no relationship between us
There never will be
And i cant talk to you, when ive tried to so hard
If i told you how i felt it would bring you more disgust

Why do you take away what you know makes me happy
You see how unhappy i am
But you take away my only joy, only love
The one person that keeps me alive
Why do you take her from me, because i love her

This is how it will always be
Theres nothing i can do,
To have you accept me
So i must say goodbye to you,
For im leaving you emotionally, till i can leave physicaly too

So thanks for everytime you made me cry,
Thanks for making me hurt so much
Thanks for everything you did that killed me inside
Thanks for never being there, When i needed you the most.





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Re: Mom,... (User Rating: 1 )
by Jen54 on Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 09:26:11 PM AEST
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great poem
I am kinda going through something similar.
"Im trying to hard to be happy
And i cant hold on to anything good
When i feel so torn,
Completly broken by you"
that got to me the most.
keep it up!!!
-Jen


Re: Mom,... (User Rating: 1 )
by Kamal on Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 04:04:11 PM AEST
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Forgive her becasue imagine God and his commandments... which we break all the time every tried reading the bible because when someone breaks the law death would be the penalty...
in todays time we don't even know if God exist.. becasue we can't see it... but know it...

Forgive her please she brought you life and when you coulnd't feed yourself she feed you when you could'nt cloth yourself she clothed you...
I hope you can find some good in her to forgive her please don't hate her becasue she made you cry... I mean world make s me cry but I don't hate the world white poeple made black people cry but there are still many of us jsut getting along... fine...
I feel you please understand what I am telling you....

Peace &Love
great poem but it kinda disgust me....




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