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Array ( [sid] => 96715 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => murderer of emotions [time] => 2005-06-03 14:22:03 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I sit and stare into space
I have a blank look upon my face
Sitting, looking, searching forever
Thinking of the pain I could endeavor
Trying to break free but I am chained
To dangerous, I must be contained
My subconsious mind kills dreadfully slow
I laugh evilly at the pian my victims forego
Blood covers my hand when I drop the knife
Slowly, painfuly putting an end to life
Even though I am chained nothing will stop me
I have a second part that no one can see
Guards all around but Im killing this very second
To me the blood and death beckoned
They allowed me to get the way i am
Killing everyone i possibly can
Now theres no turning back
Since now my eyes are pitch black
they are filled with murder, rage and sin
Im trying to kill this evilness within
I pick up the knife and open my vein
I hope that this will end all the pain

My victims seem to be my emotions inside
Emotionally dead, I have no where to hide
Now everyone sees the evil I brought
But no one sees the batles I fought
My emotions are dead but I am alive
But I can end this horror if I only try [comments] => 3 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 13 [informant] => shatteredreflection [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
murderer of emotions

Contributed by shatteredreflection on Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 02:22:03 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



I sit and stare into space
I have a blank look upon my face
Sitting, looking, searching forever
Thinking of the pain I could endeavor
Trying to break free but I am chained
To dangerous, I must be contained
My subconsious mind kills dreadfully slow
I laugh evilly at the pian my victims forego
Blood covers my hand when I drop the knife
Slowly, painfuly putting an end to life
Even though I am chained nothing will stop me
I have a second part that no one can see
Guards all around but Im killing this very second
To me the blood and death beckoned
They allowed me to get the way i am
Killing everyone i possibly can
Now theres no turning back
Since now my eyes are pitch black
they are filled with murder, rage and sin
Im trying to kill this evilness within
I pick up the knife and open my vein
I hope that this will end all the pain

My victims seem to be my emotions inside
Emotionally dead, I have no where to hide
Now everyone sees the evil I brought
But no one sees the batles I fought
My emotions are dead but I am alive
But I can end this horror if I only try




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Re: murderer of emotions (User Rating: 1 )
by Fears on Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 04:08:58 PM AEST
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wow, that is really scary yet verrrry good. I liked it so keep on posting on this site!

~Fears


Re: murderer of emotions (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Saturday, 4th June 2005 @ 10:43:01 AM AEST
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Dark indeed! Interesting perspective. I enjoyed this one...Well done.
Scorp.


Re: murderer of emotions (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 01:46:28 AM AEST
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Very dark very deep
well writin I liked it




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