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Drinking milk from a margarita glass
that isn't glass but plastic
Clear, with colored squares

Eating
sausage
and
potatoes
with
bread
and
butter
Actually margarine

But who cares
Really?

I am alone
you are not here

And as I finish my food
and milk
I am still hungry
Still thirsty

And I wait
for you
to come
to me.

Carol [comments] => 5 [counter] => 257 [topic] => 43 [informant] => freckle [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Milk in a Margarita Glass

Contributed by freckle on Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 08:09:15 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Milk in a Margarita Glass

Drinking milk from a margarita glass
that isn't glass but plastic
Clear, with colored squares

Eating
sausage
and
potatoes
with
bread
and
butter
Actually margarine

But who cares
Really?

I am alone
you are not here

And as I finish my food
and milk
I am still hungry
Still thirsty

And I wait
for you
to come
to me.

Carol

Copyright © freckle ... [ 2005-06-02 20:09:15]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Milk in a Margarita Glass (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 08:22:42 PM AEST
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Well, thank goodness the bouquet of milk is not affected by the shape of the glass it is served in. I have drank wine from a Tippee cup and tasted the same to me. My food and beverage choices are mine and so is whatever I/you wish to eat or drink them from. Yeah, Carol, do it your way.

Smiles,
Rita

Re: Milk in a Margarita Glass (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 01:35:20 AM AEST
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A sad but very expressive from the heart write, nicely done carol . . .

Benedetto John Papa Sr.

aka. Dorian Chambers

Re: Milk in a Margarita Glass (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 03:08:35 PM AEST
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LOL Milk and Margaritas? You sure your ok Carolita?

Anyways i think you did well with this peice. I enjoyed reading it and like Blueboy said "It has a "There" sounds to it".

Jane xx

Re: Milk in a Margarita Glass (User Rating: 1 )
by SensitiveSoAbused on Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 07:31:57 PM AEST
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A good poem. I enjoyed the format. Dammit I never get that many comments ;)

Re: Milk in a Margarita Glass (User Rating: 1 )
by NDean on Thursday, 7th December 2006 @ 02:41:57 PM AEST
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Cool Poem
Different
:D

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