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Array ( [sid] => 96586 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Pictures of blood cover my eyes [time] => 2005-06-02 11:51:50 [hometext] => comments are apreciated good or bad ones [bodytext] => Butterflys and razor blades
Slowly partakes in what it invades.
Bloody dew upon the grass,
You lie, life doesnt go by too fast.
It drags on for days and days.
I'm the worlds easiest prey.
Cut me up, stomp me down.
Watch this smile turn into a frown
Purple scars upon my wrist,
rusty blades clutched in my fist.
Daring not to riside in my bloody act.
Its self confidence that I lack
So here I am writing again,
I turn to paper, not a friend.

Kate Ecklund [comments] => 4 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 72 [informant] => suicidal_imbecile [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => self-harmpoetry )

Pictures of blood cover my eyes

Contributed by suicidal_imbecile on Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 11:51:50 AM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry

Butterflys and razor blades
Slowly partakes in what it invades.
Bloody dew upon the grass,
You lie, life doesnt go by too fast.
It drags on for days and days.
I'm the worlds easiest prey.
Cut me up, stomp me down.
Watch this smile turn into a frown
Purple scars upon my wrist,
rusty blades clutched in my fist.
Daring not to riside in my bloody act.
Its self confidence that I lack
So here I am writing again,
I turn to paper, not a friend.

Kate Ecklund

Copyright Â© suicidal_imbecile ... [ 2005-06-02 11:51:50]
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Re: Pictures of blood cover my eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by ruthie1983 on Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 12:02:22 PM AEST
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dang!, this is a strong poetry. Hope everything is ok!

Re: Pictures of blood cover my eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 01:51:47 PM AEST
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Yeah this is strong poetry Kate but it is beautiful as well in the way that people like us only see. It shows the pain and emotions you are feeling so well and it flows really well. You showed your pain with strong imagery in this write and it really painted a picture for the reader. You will shock more with this one and I hope they comment. I feel for you and I’m always here if you need to vent. I love your writes and I’ll try to read them when I have time but life is busy over here. My thoughts go out to you take care always Kate….Steve.

Re: Pictures of blood cover my eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 03:21:24 PM AEST
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powerful write

Re: Pictures of blood cover my eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Scarlett on Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 04:38:32 AM AEST
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this was really powerful, i liked the simplicity of it. though the rhythm wasn't perfect it kept it flowing and the rhyme was good too. strong images and i can relate to the content. well expressed.

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