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loving, tight embrace
delicate lip lock
hands clasped, we walk
Destination unknown
somewhere alone...
conversation unrushed
past pains hushed
Slow dance in the dark
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Solace

Contributed by hauntedscorp on Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 12:54:24 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

The look on your face
loving, tight embrace
delicate lip lock
hands clasped, we walk
Destination unknown
somewhere alone...
conversation unrushed
past pains hushed
Slow dance in the dark
under the stars in a park...

Copyright © hauntedscorp ... [ 2005-06-02 00:54:24]
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Re: Solace (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 01:15:15 AM AEST
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(((Scorp)))))

This poem is warm and lovely , I love it

Leia

Re: Solace (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 01:24:40 AM AEST
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Scorp i like this poem, but somehow i think there are some lines that are missing. It could be just me but theres something missing.

J xx
(Who hates looking like a "B")

Re: Solace (User Rating: 1 )
by shadowmaster_045 on Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 01:49:55 AM AEST
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Short, sweet, and too the point. I like it.

Re: Solace (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 08:20:11 AM AEST
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Very nice, adventurous and mysterious. " destination unknown...." it's rythmn and flow were right on the button as well. Well done!

Re: Solace (User Rating: 1 )
by jyssvw22 on Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 09:02:21 AM AEST
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nice write...

so peaceful

Re: Solace (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 10:49:51 AM AEST
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you paint a very pretty picture lady and write a beautiful peice of poetry as always teasing the imagination as well as the heart . . .

Ben

aka. Dorian Chambers

Re: Solace (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 01:43:05 PM AEST
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Wow, what a very emotional poem, you used very good words to express what you were actually feeling, it is also a beautifull poem, I felt this one deeply catch my heart. SLipSiX.

Re: Solace (User Rating: 1 )
by Arden on Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 10:17:29 AM AEST
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short, simple and sweet.
kinda short and maybe a bit to blunt. but nice work nontheless.
-Rebekah

Re: Solace (User Rating: 1 )
by boobiepeach on Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 03:23:32 PM AEST
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simple and pretty
where has suditly gone?
a breath of fresh air my friend.

Re: Solace (User Rating: 1 )
by Dorkfish on Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 03:25:19 PM AEST
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Short & Sweet. I like it. Very nice!

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