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I Hurt Me Too
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 07:21:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
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early on i vowed to myself
you hurt me i hurt me too
but i had faith in what we had
i had trust in you
early on i promised myself
i hurt you i hurt me too
now that the damage is done
i know what i have to do
cut myself open
i'll make you watch me bleed
you like what you see?
it's because you hurt me
i'll kill myself in front of you
make you watch me cry
make you watch me die
because you hurt me
early on i told myself
you hurt me i hurt me too
i sharped the knife now
and it's all because of you
you hurt me....
broken and scarred,
~jennie*
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Re: I Hurt Me Too
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by twisted_dreams on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 07:24:51 PM AEST
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Great write! Nice flow.. keep up the good work!
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Re: I Hurt Me Too
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by all_the_dead_roses on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 07:26:15 PM AEST
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I understand what your going through. I like the poem, but I really hope you don't cut yourself. Don't hurt youself, because he's dumb and he hurt you.
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Re: I Hurt Me Too
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by spazz911 on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 08:25:28 PM AEST
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i hope u r better now than b4 u seem so at school, please talk to me
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Re: I Hurt Me Too
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by Arden on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 10:11:38 AM AEST
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well if it was me and someone hurt me then i'd hurt them back lol
but thats just me and i'm heartless ;)
emotional poem. but you shouldnt hurt yourself after someone hurts you. try talking to people, it helps.
well thats my to sense worth.
keep writing, it helps.
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Re: I Hurt Me Too
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by sride686 on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 11:22:29 AM AEST
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| Very nice write filled with such a strong release of pain and loss. It flows smooth and draws the reader in to feeling the pain. Very well done and another one of your writes that I enjoyed reading. Take care my friend and keep your head up. Your friend….Steve |
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Re: I Hurt Me Too
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 05:13:48 PM AEST
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Oh Jennie Girl...........don't pick up where they left off.........you don't deserve that kind of treatment......don't allow them to pull you down anymore.rid yourself of the refuge....they don't deserve you.....move on.
Nice poem, but very self destructive.....please positive and give yourself a lift
Warm love and hugs
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