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Array ( [sid] => 96530 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Hurt Me Too [time] => 2005-06-01 19:21:27 [hometext] => comments pleeeease!!! [bodytext] => early on i vowed to myself
you hurt me i hurt me too
but i had faith in what we had
i had trust in you

early on i promised myself
i hurt you i hurt me too
now that the damage is done
i know what i have to do

cut myself open
i'll make you watch me bleed
you like what you see?
it's because you hurt me

i'll kill myself in front of you
make you watch me cry
make you watch me die
because you hurt me

early on i told myself
you hurt me i hurt me too
i sharped the knife now
and it's all because of you

you hurt me....

broken and scarred,
~jennie* [comments] => 6 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 48 [informant] => blue_angel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

I Hurt Me Too

Contributed by blue_angel on Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 07:21:27 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

early on i vowed to myself
you hurt me i hurt me too
but i had faith in what we had
i had trust in you

early on i promised myself
i hurt you i hurt me too
now that the damage is done
i know what i have to do

cut myself open
i'll make you watch me bleed
you like what you see?
it's because you hurt me

i'll kill myself in front of you
make you watch me cry
make you watch me die
because you hurt me

early on i told myself
you hurt me i hurt me too
i sharped the knife now
and it's all because of you

you hurt me....

broken and scarred,
~jennie*

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Re: I Hurt Me Too (User Rating: 1 )
by twisted_dreams on Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 07:24:51 PM AEST
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Great write! Nice flow.. keep up the good work!

Sidney

Re: I Hurt Me Too (User Rating: 1 )
by all_the_dead_roses on Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 07:26:15 PM AEST
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I understand what your going through. I like the poem, but I really hope you don't cut yourself. Don't hurt youself, because he's dumb and he hurt you.

~sara

Re: I Hurt Me Too (User Rating: 1 )
by spazz911 on Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 08:25:28 PM AEST
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i hope u r better now than b4 u seem so at school, please talk to me
kc

Re: I Hurt Me Too (User Rating: 1 )
by Arden on Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 10:11:38 AM AEST
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well if it was me and someone hurt me then i'd hurt them back lol
but thats just me and i'm heartless ;)
emotional poem. but you shouldnt hurt yourself after someone hurts you. try talking to people, it helps.
well thats my to sense worth.
keep writing, it helps.
-Rebekah

Re: I Hurt Me Too (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 11:22:29 AM AEST
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Very nice write filled with such a strong release of pain and loss. It flows smooth and draws the reader in to feeling the pain. Very well done and another one of your writes that I enjoyed reading. Take care my friend and keep your head up. Your friend….Steve

Re: I Hurt Me Too (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 05:13:48 PM AEST
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Oh Jennie Girl...........don't pick up where they left off.........you don't deserve that kind of treatment......don't allow them to pull you down anymore.rid yourself of the refuge....they don't deserve you.....move on.
Nice poem, but very self destructive.....please positive and give yourself a lift
Warm love and hugs
consue

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