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Array ( [sid] => 96509 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dead [time] => 2005-06-01 15:40:58 [hometext] => Please commet* [bodytext] => As I look down to my wrist
And wonder why I just did what I did
I slit my wrist again
But I think this time I carved to deep
Regret and fear run through my mind
Am I going to die?
But now its to late
Theres no turning back
It had to be done
Blood is pouring out of my wound
I'm feeling weak
I've collasped to the floor unable to think
I see blackness appearing
I can no longer see
I'm feeling dizzy
All I hope now is that I don't awake in the hospital bed
And pray nobody finds me until i'm dead
I need to be dead... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 72 [informant] => TearsICry [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 11 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => self-harmpoetry )

Dead

Contributed by TearsICry on Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 03:40:58 PM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry

As I look down to my wrist
And wonder why I just did what I did
I slit my wrist again
But I think this time I carved to deep
Regret and fear run through my mind
Am I going to die?
But now its to late
Theres no turning back
It had to be done
Blood is pouring out of my wound
I'm feeling weak
I've collasped to the floor unable to think
I see blackness appearing
I can no longer see
I'm feeling dizzy
All I hope now is that I don't awake in the hospital bed
And pray nobody finds me until i'm dead
I need to be dead...

Copyright © TearsICry ... [ 2005-06-01 15:40:58]
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Re: Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 04:03:23 PM AEST
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TearsIcry

Yuck
Then comes death
Then the torment
Eternity in Hell

Sinned

Re: Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by bethers_is_my_baby on Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 05:00:39 PM AEST
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awwww hang in there! i know how u feel.

*~Peace and love~*

Re: Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by Shishke_Bob on Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 10:56:43 PM AEST
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this was a heart felt sad poem and it is one that is in need of more comments to show that there are people here that do care for you, I do hope that you are not thinking of going through with this, just think of what could happen tomorrow, you never can tell what your future holds and you never will if you end it all. I do think that it would do many people good to read this it will help them to know what its like to feel this way and they could possible understand it better. I will pray for you that you will no longer hurt, God bless.

KaBob

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