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You're still trying to make me feel like I'm going insane.
When will you realize it takes two to fight.
Once you do, I'll sleep through the night.
All this fighting has got to stop.
Once it does, our love will once again be on top.
But if it does'nt one of us will have to pay.
It will probably be me, cuz you know I'll stay! [comments] => 4 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 6 [informant] => wlamom [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Who

Contributed by wlamom on Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 02:52:01 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Here we go again, and I'm to blame.
You're still trying to make me feel like I'm going insane.
When will you realize it takes two to fight.
Once you do, I'll sleep through the night.
All this fighting has got to stop.
Once it does, our love will once again be on top.
But if it does'nt one of us will have to pay.
It will probably be me, cuz you know I'll stay!

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Re: Who (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 09:21:45 PM AEST
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Most of your poems have a very offguard ending that really impacts the reader, this one did, though not as strong. Something seemed to be missing in this maybe its too long for your style :) im not sure, this was still a very good write however.

Awesome job,
--amanda--

Re: Who (User Rating: 1 )
by Thoren on Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 08:40:04 PM AEST
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The emotions that this poem stirs up inside of me, makes me want to scream, fight, cry, etc. That's a good thing. You managed to capture all those feelings, and then some, and put them into a very well written poem. The length of your poem is perfect, also. A lot of authors, myself included, have a tendency to over-write the hell out of subjects, which, in turn, leads to a lot of unfinished, jumbled up, rambling headaches for the reader. You managed to avoid this, altogether. Great poem.

Re: Who (User Rating: 1 )
by lady-quiet-dreamer on Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 01:02:16 PM AEST
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this is a great poem but i don't think the tital is compleate. maybe i'm wrong i don't know. anyway good poem

Re: Who (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 7th January 2006 @ 01:03:49 PM AEST
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you are an amazing writer, and this was definitely a strong, powerful poem.

i love it

- Beth -

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