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Array ( [sid] => 96483 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lovers lost [time] => 2005-06-01 11:52:31 [hometext] => Just a poem about an imaginary girl I made up... Im sure people who have lost love may be able to relate to this relatively dark piece of poetry. Enjoy :) [bodytext] => Tears blackened with the pigmentation of her poisoned painful past,
A scar deeply etched on her left cheek, the immense anguish will forever last.
Her blood red lips are sewn tightly together, forbidden to speak the truth,
Her speech suffocated in silence, the whole world seems ignorantly aloof.

Her eyes refract the toil and torment that has coldly crucified her harmonious heart,
Ripped carelessly in two by heartfelt hatred, the unfated lovers were strewn apart,
Lost in the midst of sparkling stars, misguided by their perfect appearance,
Alone in a confused world of doubtful dreams, terrified of her now gained independence.

Love laughed longingly in her innocent face,brought her down to her knees,
Destructively destroyed her passion in life, left her begging with all her please,
Pure emptiness fills her sacred soul, she despises the life she leads,
Loneliness leads the way for her, on her unhappiness the monster feeds.


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Lovers lost

Contributed by xx_lil_devilish_angel_xx on Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 11:52:31 AM in AEST
Topic: fictional



Tears blackened with the pigmentation of her poisoned painful past,
A scar deeply etched on her left cheek, the immense anguish will forever last.
Her blood red lips are sewn tightly together, forbidden to speak the truth,
Her speech suffocated in silence, the whole world seems ignorantly aloof.

Her eyes refract the toil and torment that has coldly crucified her harmonious heart,
Ripped carelessly in two by heartfelt hatred, the unfated lovers were strewn apart,
Lost in the midst of sparkling stars, misguided by their perfect appearance,
Alone in a confused world of doubtful dreams, terrified of her now gained independence.

Love laughed longingly in her innocent face,brought her down to her knees,
Destructively destroyed her passion in life, left her begging with all her please,
Pure emptiness fills her sacred soul, she despises the life she leads,
Loneliness leads the way for her, on her unhappiness the monster feeds.






Copyright © xx_lil_devilish_angel_xx ... [ 2005-06-01 11:52:31]
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Re: Lovers lost (User Rating: 1 )
by i_heart_herby on Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 12:31:22 PM AEST
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i can totally relate. I had a guy who i loved go from me to another girl, who is know one of my closest friends. They just got together again. They seem happy so i can't complain.


Re: Lovers lost (User Rating: 1 )
by seci on Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 04:28:24 PM AEST
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the way you write is very creative. i like the way you used your words and the poem , i like.




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