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Array ( [sid] => 96464 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => She Wants To Get There On Her Own! [time] => 2005-06-01 08:07:39 [hometext] => this is about my best friend, who doesnt know what to do!! please comment! [bodytext] => Her life is full of emotion,
Her parents carry on fighting,
Her friends are never there,
She expresses how she feels, in writing.

Her parents are divorced,
Her dad still hit her mom,
Her mind keeps asking,
“Why is this still going on?!”

Her life is full of questions,
Her mind just cant answer them,
Her heart is so caring,
A lot of things she needs to condemn.

Her feelings she’ll never let out,
Her heart she’ll never let love,
Her words are so mixed up,
She needs to speak to Him, above.

Her best friend is there for her,
Her mom isn’t there,
Her dad lives so far away,
Its like they don’t even care.

Her thoughts need to be expressed,
Her wrists are like a collage
Her parents don’t care,
To them, she’s just a mirage!

Her life isn’t crap,
Her life is badly troubled,
Her mind is everywhere,
She is still baffled.

That girl is so sad,
But she wont show anyone,
She wont let anyone help,
She believes she can get there alone
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 16 [informant] => BuggY [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

She Wants To Get There On Her Own!

Contributed by BuggY on Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 08:07:39 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

Her life is full of emotion,
Her parents carry on fighting,
Her friends are never there,
She expresses how she feels, in writing.

Her parents are divorced,
Her dad still hit her mom,
Her mind keeps asking,
“Why is this still going on?!”

Her life is full of questions,
Her mind just cant answer them,
Her heart is so caring,
A lot of things she needs to condemn.

Her feelings she’ll never let out,
Her heart she’ll never let love,
Her words are so mixed up,
She needs to speak to Him, above.

Her best friend is there for her,
Her mom isn’t there,
Her dad lives so far away,
Its like they don’t even care.

Her thoughts need to be expressed,
Her wrists are like a collage
Her parents don’t care,
To them, she’s just a mirage!

Her life isn’t crap,
Her life is badly troubled,
Her mind is everywhere,
She is still baffled.

That girl is so sad,
But she wont show anyone,
She wont let anyone help,
She believes she can get there alone

Copyright Â© BuggY ... [ 2005-06-01 08:07:39]
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Re: She Wants To Get There On Her Own! (User Rating: 1 )
by justme03 on Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 07:57:36 AM AEST
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i been this girl.. only a bit different circumstances.
awesome write concerning your friend. i can tell how much yu wish to help her
lots o love, Kortnie

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