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put it on the shelf
the disassembled
mutilation of self
and i leave the image
the story
the fate
i leave it to dust
i leave it to wait

for the broken wrists
to untie the veil
untie the noose
escape the jail
the prison sentence
book of life
book of pride

i left you wrapped in the pages
i left you to rot
through the ages
you're a simple word
a namesake
on a tattered page of denial

i've locked you away
to receive a just fate
i don't feel you
i won't feel you

the inevitable ink on the paper
the inevitable regret on the shelf
the tempter the temptest
of hurting myself

the book is closed
the scarlet letter next to your name
marking you irrelevant to life
the traitor on the broken wrists
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On The Broken Wrists

Contributed by weepingprophet on Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 02:49:47 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

when i close the book
put it on the shelf
the disassembled
mutilation of self
and i leave the image
the story
the fate
i leave it to dust
i leave it to wait

for the broken wrists
to untie the veil
untie the noose
escape the jail
the prison sentence
book of life
book of pride

i left you wrapped in the pages
i left you to rot
through the ages
you're a simple word
a namesake
on a tattered page of denial

i've locked you away
to receive a just fate
i don't feel you
i won't feel you

the inevitable ink on the paper
the inevitable regret on the shelf
the tempter the temptest
of hurting myself

the book is closed
the scarlet letter next to your name
marking you irrelevant to life
the traitor on the broken wrists
you're an inevitable life sentence

Copyright © weepingprophet ... [ 2005-05-31 14:49:47]
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Re: On The Broken Wrists (User Rating: 1 )
by i_heart_herby on Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 04:06:43 PM AEST
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woah....i liked this poem a lot...it is REALLY good....

Re: On The Broken Wrists (User Rating: 1 )
by bethers_is_my_baby on Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 04:30:38 PM AEST
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wow! great poem!!! keep up the good work!

Re: On The Broken Wrists (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 06:23:04 PM AEST
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This is a really well expressed write. I liked this alot! You remind me of another poet on here...similar style. (compliment...) Keep up the great work! Scorp.

Re: On The Broken Wrists (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 04:44:09 AM AEST
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amazing, well done!

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