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Array ( [sid] => 96383 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => like you always wanted to [time] => 2005-05-31 14:34:42 [hometext] => This is about my aunt Julia And how i miss her dearly [bodytext] => I cant seem to take my mind, my heart, or my eyes off of you
since you've left my lifes been askew
i miss you, i love you even more
Why couldnt he stop you from walking out that door,
into the woods, and to heaven from there
I couldnt believe it when i heard the news,
I just keep screaming "F*** you!"
F***k it and F*** life
Why'd you leave us to live with this strife
He was going to help you the very next morning
check you into the hospital
God, is this truly possible??
I dont want to let this fog my mind, but i cant let myself forget you
Your flowers, you beautiful smile
your geourgous brown eyes,
They could never seem to find peace
But now your ashes lie in the ground
next to my brother, and grandfather
now you can take care of all of us
just like you always wanted to [comments] => 1 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 32 [informant] => crazygirl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

like you always wanted to

Contributed by crazygirl on Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 02:34:42 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I cant seem to take my mind, my heart, or my eyes off of you
since you've left my lifes been askew
i miss you, i love you even more
Why couldnt he stop you from walking out that door,
into the woods, and to heaven from there
I couldnt believe it when i heard the news,
I just keep screaming "F*** you!"
F***k it and F*** life
Why'd you leave us to live with this strife
He was going to help you the very next morning
check you into the hospital
God, is this truly possible??
I dont want to let this fog my mind, but i cant let myself forget you
Your flowers, you beautiful smile
your geourgous brown eyes,
They could never seem to find peace
But now your ashes lie in the ground
next to my brother, and grandfather
now you can take care of all of us
just like you always wanted to

Copyright © crazygirl ... [ 2005-05-31 14:34:42]
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Re: like you always wanted to (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 03:36:42 PM AEST
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Crazygirl

Crazy-Not...I'm so sorry that you lost your loving Aunt.
Once born we begin to die it is just life..a journey we take to getto heaven. I am sure Your Aunt is there and this poem is a nice tribute to her.
Peace be with you
God bless

Sinned

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