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Array ( [sid] => 96377 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Photo [time] => 2005-05-31 13:24:36 [hometext] => They say a picture is worth a thousand words, but is the picture worth the words of a painful memory? [bodytext] => a photo of you
colored by the past
too good to be true
i knew it couldn't last
your love
like that blade on my wrist
it scarred so bad
but hurt so good
like my heart
red with desire
black with dismay
every damn thing
that you ever did say
blatant lies
and dimented games
the knife in your chest will be the end of my pain
at first i'll laugh
when you slowly die
welcome to your grave
but you still make me cry...... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 13 [informant] => MysticFireFairy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Photo

Contributed by MysticFireFairy on Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 01:24:36 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

a photo of you
colored by the past
too good to be true
i knew it couldn't last
your love
like that blade on my wrist
it scarred so bad
but hurt so good
like my heart
red with desire
black with dismay
every damn thing
that you ever did say
blatant lies
and dimented games
the knife in your chest will be the end of my pain
at first i'll laugh
when you slowly die
welcome to your grave
but you still make me cry......

Copyright © MysticFireFairy ... [ 2005-05-31 13:24:36]
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Re: Photo (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 06:54:18 PM AEST
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This is excellent---well expressed. Bravo!!
Scorp.

Re: Photo (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 10:01:21 PM AEST
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WOW.... I LOVE THIS POEM! I can relate to every word you said! its crazy! This poem is the best... very well written !! Gosh I would love to see a knife in my love's chest...because then I could say.. well hey thats how you make me feel... gosh.. but no matter what.. happens to your loved one, no matter how bad they make you feel or sad they make you feel, you still have feelings for them.. and wish there was a way..to stop all feelings for them but u can't well thats atleast how I feel.. ok I'm just gonna stop rambling on and on! well all in all GREAT POEM its beatiful and deep!!! Keep writing... Stay Strong *hugs*

Re: Photo (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 10:03:51 PM AEST
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beautiful*** ^_^ I spelt it wrong

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