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Array ( [sid] => 96364 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Before The End [time] => 2005-05-31 11:49:02 [hometext] => [bodytext] => So if your here for her youll be happy forever,
So if your near your death you know youll feel like a feather.
& if your out in the rain no one will leave together,
& if your out alone just look at the past that you remember.
So stay inside because you wont be the choosen,
So write her everyday & remember the love you send.

Cause of pain & love,
Cause of death of a dove.

The purest white is gone thanks to the ideas you blend in,
The oldest tree is gone thanks to the fever you gave me.
& if the sunset is grey because the blue face you showed,
& if the moon is red iits because the blood that flowed.

I guess the sky is far but my heart is ready,
Iguess the ground is deep but lifes not steady.

So please dont follow me if you keep ignoring,
So please dont follow me if I dont wkae up this morning.
So let me be again just for the prize & challenge,
So let me see tha moon but the sun has an advantage.
& now that its the end bring me all my writing,
& now that Im downstairs you know Im not playing.
But since Im gone & dead,
Make sure my minds in bed. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 193 [topic] => 14 [informant] => Ranchan [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

Before The End

Contributed by Ranchan on Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 11:49:02 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

So if your here for her youll be happy forever,
So if your near your death you know youll feel like a feather.
& if your out in the rain no one will leave together,
& if your out alone just look at the past that you remember.
So stay inside because you wont be the choosen,
So write her everyday & remember the love you send.

Cause of pain & love,
Cause of death of a dove.

The purest white is gone thanks to the ideas you blend in,
The oldest tree is gone thanks to the fever you gave me.
& if the sunset is grey because the blue face you showed,
& if the moon is red iits because the blood that flowed.

I guess the sky is far but my heart is ready,
Iguess the ground is deep but lifes not steady.

So please dont follow me if you keep ignoring,
So please dont follow me if I dont wkae up this morning.
So let me be again just for the prize & challenge,
So let me see tha moon but the sun has an advantage.
& now that its the end bring me all my writing,
& now that Im downstairs you know Im not playing.
But since Im gone & dead,
Make sure my minds in bed.

Copyright © Ranchan ... [ 2005-05-31 11:49:02]
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Re: Before The End (User Rating: 1 )
by remote on Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 04:49:34 PM AEST
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Interesting write, especially last two lines.

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