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Array ( [sid] => 96337 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Away from you [time] => 2005-05-31 04:16:46 [hometext] => Farewells tear people apart,................. 'dont they!?' [bodytext] => Look me in the eye and tell me what you think
Tell me that I left you alone to fight by yourself
Tell me how bad a friend I was
Tell me you hate how I could just walk away from you
Crying but really nowhere near hurting as much as you
Well guess what
I didn’t want to go
I never wanted you to hurt
I never wanted to do something
That would make you hate me
I didn’t want to leave you and know that one-day you’ll hate me
And start forgetting who I was
Not who I am
Well guess the ***** what
that day is already here
Yeah that’s right
And I’m sorry but those reasons
Those reasons are lies
Those reasons are lies that you made up in your head
Because you were angry that for once in your life
Something happened that you couldn’t control
Someone was torn from you and you didn’t like it
Well try being the one that was torn away
Because admit it
You weren’t the only one I left and had to say goodbye to that day
I didn’t even get a chance to say goodbye to anyone but you
So shouldn’t that be enough
Shouldn’t that be convincing enough?
That I didn’t have one word to say
Weather or not I could leave you or not
I didn’t want to go
Im sorry
And you of all people should know that
Not in a ***** million years would I have ever wanted to go
To leave you alone
With pain
And blades to cut with
Well don’t forget little girl
I was the one you learnt from
What to do with those sharp blades
So isn’t it a good thing I’m not there anymore
How can I be so ***** stupid?
You saw those blood stained tears I cried for you
On that day
You and only you
Are the only one who has seen those tears
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 214 [topic] => 50 [informant] => Momen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ApologyPoetry )
Away from you

Contributed by Momen on Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 04:16:46 AM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry



Look me in the eye and tell me what you think
Tell me that I left you alone to fight by yourself
Tell me how bad a friend I was
Tell me you hate how I could just walk away from you
Crying but really nowhere near hurting as much as you
Well guess what
I didn’t want to go
I never wanted you to hurt
I never wanted to do something
That would make you hate me
I didn’t want to leave you and know that one-day you’ll hate me
And start forgetting who I was
Not who I am
Well guess the ***** what
that day is already here
Yeah that’s right
And I’m sorry but those reasons
Those reasons are lies
Those reasons are lies that you made up in your head
Because you were angry that for once in your life
Something happened that you couldn’t control
Someone was torn from you and you didn’t like it
Well try being the one that was torn away
Because admit it
You weren’t the only one I left and had to say goodbye to that day
I didn’t even get a chance to say goodbye to anyone but you
So shouldn’t that be enough
Shouldn’t that be convincing enough?
That I didn’t have one word to say
Weather or not I could leave you or not
I didn’t want to go
Im sorry
And you of all people should know that
Not in a ***** million years would I have ever wanted to go
To leave you alone
With pain
And blades to cut with
Well don’t forget little girl
I was the one you learnt from
What to do with those sharp blades
So isn’t it a good thing I’m not there anymore
How can I be so ***** stupid?
You saw those blood stained tears I cried for you
On that day
You and only you
Are the only one who has seen those tears




Copyright © Momen ... [ 2005-05-31 04:16:46]
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Re: Away from you (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 06:28:48 PM AEST
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Extremely deep.


Re: Away from you (User Rating: 1 )
by Elfie on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 11:36:25 AM AEST
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cool, i like poems that aren't too specific like yours, so i can relate it to something that happend to me!




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