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Array ( [sid] => 9631 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => The Last Fallen Rose Petals [time] => 2003-01-02 14:40:00 [hometext] => This song is gunna be under the EMO catagory when I play it. It's about not being able to let go because you can never forget. "Sometimes a memory can become your hell" [bodytext] => The last fallen rose petals
Bleed to my desk
The mark of another day alone
A LoNeR
A feeling I've suffered
Since the day you were gone
I need you, to stay alive
To live

Just another forgotten love song
To one day revive
Here's to remembrance
All that we had
Just another forgotten love song
Now that you're gone
Here's to the memories
Left in this song

The last flicker of the candle's flare
Scorches my soul
The mark of a broken heart
Heartbroken
It's worse than being alone;
Knowing they've moved on
When you still need them, to stay alive
To Live

Just another forgotten love song
To one day revive
Here's to remembrance
All that we had
Just another forgotten love song
Now that you're gone
Here's to the memories
Left in this song

The last of OUR songs
Will die in the speakers
The mark of too many memories
Remembered
You're driving me crazy
'My heart does pump twice as fast
Whenever you walk by,
Because I still love you'
I still want you
And I need you, to stay alive
To Live

Just another forgotten love song
To one day revive
Here's to remembrance
All that we had
Just another forgotten love song
Now that you're gone
Here's to the memories
Left in this song

The last fallen rose petals
I'll watch fall
Remember the days you were mine
How often you'd call
All the messages you left me
That day at the mall
The times we spent together
I can remember them all
Now the only thing I wonder
Is if they matter at all

*during the last little stanza ... the chorus
is being sung by the other vocalist.* [comments] => 2 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 34 [informant] => flirtyrockstar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
The Last Fallen Rose Petals

Contributed by flirtyrockstar on Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 02:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



The last fallen rose petals
Bleed to my desk
The mark of another day alone
A LoNeR
A feeling I've suffered
Since the day you were gone
I need you, to stay alive
To live

Just another forgotten love song
To one day revive
Here's to remembrance
All that we had
Just another forgotten love song
Now that you're gone
Here's to the memories
Left in this song

The last flicker of the candle's flare
Scorches my soul
The mark of a broken heart
Heartbroken
It's worse than being alone;
Knowing they've moved on
When you still need them, to stay alive
To Live

Just another forgotten love song
To one day revive
Here's to remembrance
All that we had
Just another forgotten love song
Now that you're gone
Here's to the memories
Left in this song

The last of OUR songs
Will die in the speakers
The mark of too many memories
Remembered
You're driving me crazy
'My heart does pump twice as fast
Whenever you walk by,
Because I still love you'
I still want you
And I need you, to stay alive
To Live

Just another forgotten love song
To one day revive
Here's to remembrance
All that we had
Just another forgotten love song
Now that you're gone
Here's to the memories
Left in this song

The last fallen rose petals
I'll watch fall
Remember the days you were mine
How often you'd call
All the messages you left me
That day at the mall
The times we spent together
I can remember them all
Now the only thing I wonder
Is if they matter at all

*during the last little stanza ... the chorus
is being sung by the other vocalist.*




Copyright © flirtyrockstar ... [ 2003-01-02 14:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: The Last Fallen Rose Petals (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 06:03:46 PM AEST
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Hey, Liz I loved this no one line stuck out to me because it was all so beautiful and poignant. Wow this was really good I loved the line structure. Well actually the 1st two lines really stood out and grabbed me. What is an EMO category though? E-mail me I havent heard from you in a while! Great poem Liz!

Bobo (Joel)


Re: The Last Fallen Rose Petals (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 10:47:12 AM AEST
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This is pretty.... I love emo music... wish I could hear it played... good write :)




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