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Array ( [sid] => 96301 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Defiance of Death [time] => 2005-05-30 20:21:11 [hometext] => I dont know what catagory this belongs in...it could fit spiritual or anguish of hate or well all I know is that is emotional [bodytext] => This time around
I'm gunna run
I've got what I need
and I have a plun

So who needs a thought
when it comes to this
a moment alone
when times are amiss

Tied to a time
heart pounding sound
no need to continue
when lifes falling down

Hark hear the angels
such a beutiful sound
melody forever
tune in the ground

softly they listen
those angels of death
masked in a beauty
that is cold, hard and deaf

i hear their calling
I fell the touch of their voice
they call all to them
the prison of hell

those heavenly gates
so far and so fair
are fought for and taken
by lifes brezzy air

they take all I know
and people will follow
leave me left here below;
:a heart breaking foe

I wonder why they think its a gift
to be taken from here
from me and my thoughts
and this life that I know

so I shoot down their thoughts
and their angels of death
to rid of my pain
and show my defiance of death

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Defiance of Death

Contributed by spazz911 on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 08:21:11 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

This time around
I'm gunna run
I've got what I need
and I have a plun

So who needs a thought
when it comes to this
a moment alone
when times are amiss

Tied to a time
heart pounding sound
no need to continue
when lifes falling down

Hark hear the angels
such a beutiful sound
melody forever
tune in the ground

softly they listen
those angels of death
masked in a beauty
that is cold, hard and deaf

i hear their calling
I fell the touch of their voice
they call all to them
the prison of hell

those heavenly gates
so far and so fair
are fought for and taken
by lifes brezzy air

they take all I know
and people will follow
leave me left here below;
:a heart breaking foe

I wonder why they think its a gift
to be taken from here
from me and my thoughts
and this life that I know

so I shoot down their thoughts
and their angels of death
to rid of my pain
and show my defiance of death

Copyright © spazz911 ... [ 2005-05-30 20:21:11]
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Re: Defiance of Death (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 08:31:18 PM AEST
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oh, kc! i love it! yes.... very emotional.... but really, it's awesome. i like very, very much.... you prob know why. well, maybe it you, jennie and i link arms.... maybe we can beat the angels of death. we got to stick together, i may not tell you everything, but i can handle it by myself. i can fight off demons, barely, but i can do it. you, jennie and i have to stick together though. and watch out for each other.
keep up the good work!

~sprints

Re: Defiance of Death (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 08:40:42 PM AEST
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thats awesome... i absolutely love it... right up my ally eh? amazing... just... wow. brilliance in my eyes... great job!
jennie*

Re: Defiance of Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Jaycee on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 09:18:24 PM AEST
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A good poem with a nice theme, to triumph. Yes, the 3 of you arem in arm that way would be great. I love and I have a plun. LOL, but you made that work!

Re: Defiance of Death (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 03:48:41 AM AEST
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Very good writing.
huggs,
emy
Keep the faith and keep fighting the demons.

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