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Array ( [sid] => 96247 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => how do u feel now [time] => 2005-05-30 09:42:03 [hometext] => this poem is to my mother [bodytext] => Candle lit rooms on a dark stormy night
a full lit moon shins brightly in the sky
i hold you close, cradled in my arms
you push me away time and time again

please make up your mind
do you love me or not?
cause the more you do this
the more it hurts
i cant take this anymore
its not worth the pain
so make up your mind
do you love me or not

the dark grey clouds cover the sky
the sun shines brightly way up high
i do everything right, I'm perfect you say
i cant do nothin' right, you say the next day

I'm done playing these games
you know i don't deserve it
i tried to teach you a lesson
but i guess you didn't learn it
so I'm leavin' for real now,
you've had your chance
how do you feel now
now that you don't have a chance?

i tried to teach you a lesson
but i guess you didn't learn it
I'm leaving for real now
how do you feel now?


Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 23 [informant] => bethers_is_my_baby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => FamilyPoems )
how do u feel now

Contributed by bethers_is_my_baby on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 09:42:03 AM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems



Candle lit rooms on a dark stormy night
a full lit moon shins brightly in the sky
i hold you close, cradled in my arms
you push me away time and time again

please make up your mind
do you love me or not?
cause the more you do this
the more it hurts
i cant take this anymore
its not worth the pain
so make up your mind
do you love me or not

the dark grey clouds cover the sky
the sun shines brightly way up high
i do everything right, I'm perfect you say
i cant do nothin' right, you say the next day

I'm done playing these games
you know i don't deserve it
i tried to teach you a lesson
but i guess you didn't learn it
so I'm leavin' for real now,
you've had your chance
how do you feel now
now that you don't have a chance?

i tried to teach you a lesson
but i guess you didn't learn it
I'm leaving for real now
how do you feel now?


Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato




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Re: how do u feel now (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 11:40:05 AM AEST
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Oh wow; this is such a personal write...Well done. Scorp.


Re: how do u feel now (User Rating: 1 )
by ruthie1983 on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 12:26:08 PM AEST
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this is for your mother? well, its touching and very different from other poems i have read about mothers. Interesting write.


Re: how do u feel now (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 09:54:52 AM AEST
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I LOVE the last two stanzas! Amazing. Powerful write. But I would have to say you're lucky my mom pushes me away atleast you get to have moments where you know she loves you.

I feel your pain, amazing write.

--amanda--




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