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Array ( [sid] => 96230 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => WINDOW TO MY SOUL [time] => 2005-05-30 00:50:13 [hometext] => When I lost my dear loved one, the legacy he left was not money, and possessions, but warm love and light.... [bodytext] =>

WINDOW TO MY SOUL

May there be candles in my window....
A light to my heart, my soul aglow.
N'er the light turn to darkness,
My heart never become callus.

Candles aglow in my window,
As evening shadows o'er my mourning grow.
Light turned to darkness when you went away.
My sunshine, you, set at midday.

Alone in the darkness of daybreak,
Contemplating my fate, as I berate!
If only, If only, If only.....
my faith had not been so great
Unrealistic hope n'er imagining my fate.

Your love will always warm my heart
Memories will keep us together
forever n'er part.
My windows shine from your radiance
Depth of my soul feels pleasance.

Created by
Lovingcritters
ConSue
May 30, 2005

"In this world full of pain and sorrow,
maybe once in a lifetime, you'll find someone who
will make you feel wonderful. Hang on to that
someone no matter what!"
~No Author found~

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WINDOW TO MY SOUL

Contributed by Lovingcritters on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 12:50:13 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

WINDOW TO MY SOUL

May there be candles in my window....
A light to my heart, my soul aglow.
N'er the light turn to darkness,
My heart never become callus.

Candles aglow in my window,
As evening shadows o'er my mourning grow.
Light turned to darkness when you went away.
My sunshine, you, set at midday.

Alone in the darkness of daybreak,
Contemplating my fate, as I berate!
If only, If only, If only.....
my faith had not been so great
Unrealistic hope n'er imagining my fate.

Your love will always warm my heart
Memories will keep us together
forever n'er part.
My windows shine from your radiance
Depth of my soul feels pleasance.

Created by
Lovingcritters
ConSue
May 30, 2005

"In this world full of pain and sorrow,
maybe once in a lifetime, you'll find someone who
will make you feel wonderful. Hang on to that
someone no matter what!"
~No Author found~

Copyright © Lovingcritters ... [ 2005-05-30 00:50:13]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: WINDOW TO MY SOUL (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 12:54:05 AM AEST
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Sad but great tribute to your luved one.
hugs,
yobrat,
emy

Re: WINDOW TO MY SOUL (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 01:02:59 AM AEST
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This was just so beautiful. ConSue this was just perfection in every single way.

Hugs,
Jane xx

Re: WINDOW TO MY SOUL (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 02:00:16 AM AEST
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this poem is immortal as it will mean something
to everyone who has ever lost a loved one..
ever..

beautiful saddness my friend

Billy

Re: WINDOW TO MY SOUL (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 02:29:51 AM AEST
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A lovely tribute to your loved one..though it it looks sad...God bless peace and happiness.
humbly..venkat

Re: WINDOW TO MY SOUL (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 10:30:10 AM AEST
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Splendid in its warmth...as long as you remember they are by your side

((((((((Connie Sue))))))))))
Shari

Re: WINDOW TO MY SOUL (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 10:56:44 AM AEST
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Wonmderful tribute to a loved one that has moved on. We will meet again soon all of our loved ones. Bernard

Re: WINDOW TO MY SOUL (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 11:35:31 AM AEST
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so true, i know my mate will always live in my heart, although its hard; we are blessed connie girl, hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-

Re: WINDOW TO MY SOUL (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 06:20:04 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful, Connie. Their light and love does live on in our hearts and souls, forever. One day we will be with them again and shall rejoice for it will be forever for sure.

Rita

Re: WINDOW TO MY SOUL (User Rating: 1 )
by persia on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 06:52:56 PM AEST
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So much love and care!
i love the line
-Contemplating my fate, as I berate!

thankyou for sharing

persia

Re: WINDOW TO MY SOUL (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 02:07:14 AM AEST
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such warmth and so beautiful of a write.
you did a splendid job on this i love it.

big huggies

Re: WINDOW TO MY SOUL (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 05:33:58 PM AEST
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What a wonderful feeling to leave behind! This was beautiful poetry. J.

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