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Array ( [sid] => 96227 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Restricted half [time] => 2005-05-30 00:36:26 [hometext] => for the first time in my life i actually felt worth something... then i started thinking about my cousin :( [bodytext] => For the first time ever,
I finally felt beautiful.
These feelings I dont want to sever.

I felt happy, not sad.
extatic, not mad.
Trying to get **** up,
Not being told to shut up

Pictures snapping all around me.
I have broken away from you,
I finally feel free.
Free from the shadows that fall over your soul
Instead of half I am now a whole

What to do with this new found feeling...
She said I havnt been right,
Since I've been dealing
with what I found out that night.

Jason blew away his life with his own hate,
Was that the devils fate?
Did my preteen cousin go to hell?
From heaven has he fell?

I wish to think otherwise,
I'd rather be comforted by lies

Kate Ecklund [comments] => 1 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 65 [informant] => suicidal_imbecile [notes] => mod 9 bleep word 5/29/05 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

Restricted half

Contributed by suicidal_imbecile on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 12:36:26 AM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

For the first time ever,
I finally felt beautiful.
These feelings I dont want to sever.

I felt happy, not sad.
extatic, not mad.
Trying to get **** up,
Not being told to shut up

Pictures snapping all around me.
I have broken away from you,
I finally feel free.
Free from the shadows that fall over your soul
Instead of half I am now a whole

What to do with this new found feeling...
She said I havnt been right,
Since I've been dealing
with what I found out that night.

Jason blew away his life with his own hate,
Was that the devils fate?
Did my preteen cousin go to hell?
From heaven has he fell?

I wish to think otherwise,
I'd rather be comforted by lies

Kate Ecklund

Copyright Â© suicidal_imbecile ... [ 2005-05-30 00:36:26]
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Re: Restricted half (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 10:25:01 AM AEST
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Kate this is such a sad write and I wish I could take the pain from you and put it on my but life don’t work that way. Keep your head up and find strength in your friends and if you ever need to talk I’m always here. You may not know me but I’m a nice guy. I wrote you a little poem and I hope you start feeling better. Take care and keep up the writes of pain unleashe your friend….Steve

My heart goes out
For with pain you bleed
So take my thoughts
And start to dream
For I have no love
But I’d give you my all
To comfort your heart
And put a end to it all
~Steve~

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