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Array ( [sid] => 9622 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Losin Hope [time] => 2003-01-02 12:00:00 [hometext] => * I wrote this after I saw Eminem's movie 8 Mile. He inspired me lol. Mick said I had to take out the swear words, but if u want the uncut version give me your e-mail address and I will send it your way! This is a rap by the way! Hope you like! * [bodytext] => My friends are losin hope
At the sand they start to grope
I'm findin it harder to cope
Its like p*ssin up a rope

Chorus:
Up my nose I'm tryin to wheeze
Some parmesan cheese
I'm holdin up a stick of dynamite
I just have to light it and I'll never have to be contrite
The police are tryin to take me down,
But I live in the ghetto and its hard to shoot a clown

I'm puking into the sink
Eye swollen shut in a forever wink
I'm suffocated by these sheets
Why in the hardest game are their no cheats?

I hate being the poster boy for pain
My strength is beginning to wane, and I'm slowly goin insane
No words are comin to my head
I'm watching my heart break on my bed

I'm tryin to commit a suicide/homicide
Because so many times I shoulda' died,
But peace to me has been denied
I'm sittin under my house, tryin to hide

I'm sittin here listening to these rhythmic beats
My butt is wearin a hole in these cheap seats
My eyes are boring a hole in the wall
Just hopin they could break my endless fall

I'm amazed at how far I fell
Why I'm still alive is an even harder question to dispell
Why you look at me like I'm an albino?
When you ARE a wino

Its hard to live when your always on my case
I just wanna punch you in your ugly face
Spray you with a can of mace
And strangle myself with a metre of lace

You've distorted every option I have
I look like I've been dropped in a bucket of carbo-salve
I'm lookin sick like dogs with rabies
And your wearin you cheap Dutch clogs and holdin babies

You laugh at me, but I think I've done my duty
I'll never get you that you'll see, but you are a cutie
I'm sick of you prissy, stuck-up preps
Always actin like peace reps

*Look its about ta end*
They've gotten sick of me, their gonna hang me
I see your smiling faces, but you don't have the key
To get to me, that you'll see
I always come back to haunt the powers that be
[comments] => 7 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 34 [informant] => bobotheclown [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
Losin Hope

Contributed by bobotheclown on Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 12:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



My friends are losin hope
At the sand they start to grope
I'm findin it harder to cope
Its like p*ssin up a rope

Chorus:
Up my nose I'm tryin to wheeze
Some parmesan cheese
I'm holdin up a stick of dynamite
I just have to light it and I'll never have to be contrite
The police are tryin to take me down,
But I live in the ghetto and its hard to shoot a clown

I'm puking into the sink
Eye swollen shut in a forever wink
I'm suffocated by these sheets
Why in the hardest game are their no cheats?

I hate being the poster boy for pain
My strength is beginning to wane, and I'm slowly goin insane
No words are comin to my head
I'm watching my heart break on my bed

I'm tryin to commit a suicide/homicide
Because so many times I shoulda' died,
But peace to me has been denied
I'm sittin under my house, tryin to hide

I'm sittin here listening to these rhythmic beats
My butt is wearin a hole in these cheap seats
My eyes are boring a hole in the wall
Just hopin they could break my endless fall

I'm amazed at how far I fell
Why I'm still alive is an even harder question to dispell
Why you look at me like I'm an albino?
When you ARE a wino

Its hard to live when your always on my case
I just wanna punch you in your ugly face
Spray you with a can of mace
And strangle myself with a metre of lace

You've distorted every option I have
I look like I've been dropped in a bucket of carbo-salve
I'm lookin sick like dogs with rabies
And your wearin you cheap Dutch clogs and holdin babies

You laugh at me, but I think I've done my duty
I'll never get you that you'll see, but you are a cutie
I'm sick of you prissy, stuck-up preps
Always actin like peace reps

*Look its about ta end*
They've gotten sick of me, their gonna hang me
I see your smiling faces, but you don't have the key
To get to me, that you'll see
I always come back to haunt the powers that be




Copyright © bobotheclown ... [ 2003-01-02 12:00:00]
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Re: Losin Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 05:59:15 PM AEST
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Dearest Bobotheclown @-<-<<-
Yo, Joel, Great write!
have heard your music
in my head
would love uncut version
as per you've said:)
oldengmastiff@hotmail.com
Your friend always Nessa


Re: Losin Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 08:41:33 PM AEST
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Hey Joel, this is awesome.... got a record deal yet?? :) Write more like this... this rocks!!


Re: Losin Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by Chanti on Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 12:31:14 AM AEST
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Omigod!!!!!!! This one drove me crazy!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Im a HUGE!!! fan of Eminem, and could just hear the rap music playing to the 8 mile movie!!!!!!!!!! I loved it!!!! The movie is quite inspiring...and will live on FOREVER! ( at least for me! ) Thx so much for sharing ure work! It put a huge smile on my face!

-Chanti* :D


Re: Losin Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by Chanti on Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 12:33:24 AM AEST
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Please send me the uncut version! I was too caught up thinking about Eminem and forgot to ask!! My email is: lil_hun12@hotmail.com

Thx again!

-Chanti*


Re: Losin Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 03:10:58 AM AEST
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Dear Joel @-<-<<-
I knew it was a true rose before I read the uncut version,
but hey much better ! Not 'bad' in my eyes... Well done my friend, great write...
always Nessa


Re: Losin Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by EmptyWords on Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 05:27:28 AM AEST
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Bobo,Nice work.Definately got an Eminem feel to it i guess,although I probably wouldn't of thought so hadn't you of mentioned your inspiration came after watching 8 Mile.Not a bad movie that by the way,worth another watch and this poems definately worth another read.

Peace


Re: Losin Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by frozensuicide on Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 09:33:36 PM AEST
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ooh this has a rhythmetic beauty! i like this one. heeh. thanks for sharin.




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