Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 01-June 09:18:17 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 96199 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Brand New Sensation [time] => 2005-05-29 20:36:15 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Ladies and Gentlemen
Featuring the introduction of a brand new sensation
Yup, that’s right, sweeping the nation, and although your first inclination
Would be to embrace your destination, and allow the subliminal to take you...
The intentional venue, set on the outskirts of the old city, the stage sits so picture pretty
The daylight thrives on the crowds energy, the moonlight bows to the greater authority

Can’t compromise on the values I despise
Won’t be a partner to these generic lies

A first explosion can be seen, a fury of fireworks soaks up the scenes
The intensity of the glow radiates in the shadow
While the river red flows ever so narrow
Where the lonesome dove, meets the recently widowed sparrow
Rests a sphere so hollow, it feels no sorrow
And can envision no tomorrow

Yet its ephemerally form, so brief but cyclical
Never permanently cut from its umbilical
Always seen as wildly astronomical
The cost of free honesty
Is not expressed, numerical
Rather, the sweetness, of honey
Can be interpreted, as theoretical
I may seem impractical, or unreasonable
However, I assure you I am sensible
With a flare for the theatrical
Without the glare
I can reflect the impossible

Can’t compromise on the values I despise
Wont be a partner to these generic lies



----------------------------------------------
--------------------------------
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 43 [informant] => jyssvw22 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Brand New Sensation

Contributed by jyssvw22 on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 08:36:15 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Ladies and Gentlemen
Featuring the introduction of a brand new sensation
Yup, that’s right, sweeping the nation, and although your first inclination
Would be to embrace your destination, and allow the subliminal to take you...
The intentional venue, set on the outskirts of the old city, the stage sits so picture pretty
The daylight thrives on the crowds energy, the moonlight bows to the greater authority

Can’t compromise on the values I despise
Won’t be a partner to these generic lies

A first explosion can be seen, a fury of fireworks soaks up the scenes
The intensity of the glow radiates in the shadow
While the river red flows ever so narrow
Where the lonesome dove, meets the recently widowed sparrow
Rests a sphere so hollow, it feels no sorrow
And can envision no tomorrow

Yet its ephemerally form, so brief but cyclical
Never permanently cut from its umbilical
Always seen as wildly astronomical
The cost of free honesty
Is not expressed, numerical
Rather, the sweetness, of honey
Can be interpreted, as theoretical
I may seem impractical, or unreasonable
However, I assure you I am sensible
With a flare for the theatrical
Without the glare
I can reflect the impossible

Can’t compromise on the values I despise
Wont be a partner to these generic lies



----------------------------------------------
--------------------------------




Copyright © jyssvw22 ... [ 2005-05-29 20:36:15]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: Brand New Sensation (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 09:19:09 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
*stands up and applauds the performance*
Wonderful! Wonderful!! Everyone has to compromise sometimes...What a shame, you should really give it a try. Have I told you I love that you're expanding my English Lit??
Theatrical indeed. Way to go jyss!!
Scorp.


Re: Brand New Sensation (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 01:14:50 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
I could just picture you upon a stage reading or reciting this literany! I could also sense the crowd waiting, waiting, for the wonderful ending! Bravo! I yell real loud.......this man your applause........wasn't that sensational or what?
You have a wonderful way of taking me wherever you write.......it was a brand new sensation for me too! Do it again and again...this was a great write
Warm Love
consue




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com