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Poetic Tears

Contributed by Essentially9 on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 07:45:28 PM in AEST
Topic: poets



Poetic Tears

Her sadness is poetic,
And is unread by all.
Her words are wasted
As tears fall.

The drops glisten with the happiness
That starts to leave her heart
As loneliness
Tears her apart.

She hears the echoes of her lines
In her head full of silent sins.
She can only remember the lies
That were written behind them.

Her words are perfectly rhymed,
To portray her happiness
While others read her lines
And feel sadness.




Copyright © Essentially9 ... [ 2005-05-29 19:45:28]
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Re: Poetic Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 07:47:35 PM AEST
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hey again with the sad poety cheer up gurly gurl

and this is like the poem i wrote for xmas about the aquapets

an extended haiku


Re: Poetic Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by DirtyFool on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 08:14:37 PM AEST
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I really really love it!!! It's gotta be one of the best! You have true talent. :]
Love,
Elizabeth


Re: Poetic Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 08:31:02 PM AEST
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It's those darn people that read between the lines. No matter how well you learn your lines and lay them out there; it is like reading braille. The truth just pops right out at them.

Great write.
Rita


Re: Poetic Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Stellar on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 08:42:50 PM AEST
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Very good. Something that probably hits home to several writers on here. I know it did for me.

Stellar


Re: Poetic Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 08:48:22 PM AEST
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this is an AWESOME poem. it's a good write and i can totally see the sadness. some people don't, but, hey, maybe it takes one to see one. right? keep up the good work.

~sprints


Re: Poetic Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 10:23:20 PM AEST
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Beautiful as usual it's u and from the heart

all that matters nice write . . .

Benedetto John Papa


Re: Poetic Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 11:10:00 PM AEST
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Awesome poem I think every poet has felt
that his/her words have been wasted since
they didn't get read or commented on much.
This was a very insightful poem that many
writers can probably relate to. You conveyed
sadness and frustration well in this write.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: Poetic Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 12:46:26 AM AEST
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I like this it's so very poetic and the message is brilliant Jen.

Good writing as always.

Jane xx


Re: Poetic Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 01:16:33 AM AEST
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If any one missreads your lines better ignore such comments. :-)venkat


Re: Poetic Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 01:19:10 AM AEST
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If I were to write a ;poem, and got nothing but a big zero. I'd still consider myself a big Hero!
For poems come from your heart, and are there to depart. It's those that can write poetry that never start! It's not always the best, but the most persistant you see....and this poem of yours is as good as can be!!!
I just loved it
Warm love
consue


Re: Poetic Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 02:34:44 AM AEST
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Keep writing, my friend.
good work.
huggs,
emy


Re: Poetic Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 09:24:28 PM AEST
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LOL...wowzers Jenn.....y..lol...JEN..sorry bout that..so, really i love this one..another amazing piece of art from you...As always

~Big bro(Clark)


Re: Poetic Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 08:49:10 AM AEST
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WOW. I am speechless. ..wow..







--amanda--


Re: Poetic Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 05:21:47 PM AEST
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Very relatable feelings in this one...and I get a sense of remorse too. I enjoyed this one a lot because I can relate so well, so it's hard to pick a favourite part...I'll go with the third stanza, but I really feel the second one as well...Nice Jen...very nice.

Scorp.


Re: Poetic Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 04:18:29 PM AEST
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The person you wrote this for will be very much in appreciation.

Raquel Leah :D




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